Critic novel Chapter 16

Jerry gave me the plot of the story he wants to create. I wrote it down the laptop. So this time he wants to make a fantasy, action, Romantic movie, during the pre-hispanic era. I think it's cool the clothing will be interesting, He wants Rose and Tom again to play the lead roles.

So they are on enemy tribes. They felt physical attraction the moment they saw each other so it's a puzzle how they will end up together.

I think it's cool I just need to put an interesting part to support the plot lines. The part where the audience will surely look forward. Kissing scenes, fight scenes and stuff.

Jerry wants to start the story where they felt hate first before the attraction. He believes it will increase the interest of the audience that way. I'm just here to write it. It is Jerry's story so it's his call.

I want somebody to die in the ending. I want it to be a tragic ending. He said.

Don't you think it's too much? I love happy endings.

I want it to be tragic so they will not forget the story even the last part.

You're so mean Jerry, you're playing with the emotions of your audience too much.