His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 85
Jacqueline clenched her fists tightly, her nails digging into her palms.
"Tessa, I will make you disappear one day!"
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Late at night, a phone call woke Tessa.
She fumbled under her pillow for her phone, barely managing to squint her eyes open. In a daze, she answered a call.
A burst of loud, chaotic noises came through almost immediately.
Tessa clicked her tongue in annoyance, moving the phone away as she was irritated.
"Who is it?" she asked impatiently, her tone full of frustration at being disturbed late at night.
The person on the other end did not respond.
"Say something!"
Still, there was no response.
Only the sound of muffled noise came through.
Tessa struggled to keep her eyes open and glanced at her phone.
It was an unfamiliar number.
"Zachary?" she asked impatiently.
Finally, there was a response on the other end.
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What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...
I don’t like that Stephen is dropping Tessa. They could work together to go after James. But if this happens then I’ll stop reading....
Whats wrong with the typing?? There a lot of weird words...
More frequent updates please...
When will there be more chapters...