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Backup Girl No More: Adios to my V-card and My First Love (Brooklyn) novel Chapter 11

Chapter 11 

Chapter 11 

Here’s a culturally adapted version that captures the complex social dynamics

Mom said Aiden took off traveling with friends right after getting his acceptance letter. He’d barely been home since. His mom kept asking about my return date though

The day I flew back, my parents picked me up at the airport in formal wear. When I woke up from my jetlagged nap in the car, we were pulling up to a luxury hotel. Still groggy, I let Mom lead me into the lobby

That’s when I saw Aiden for the first time in months

My feet stopped dead

He stood by the fountain in a perfectly tailored suit, his tall frame cutting an elegant figure. One 

summer had stripped away the last traces of boyhood, transforming him into exactly the man I’d always imagined he’d become

My emotions churned as the meeting I’d avoided for so long happened without warning

Seeing my confusion, Mom whispered, Honey, it’s Aiden’s graduation celebration. We came straight 

here.” 

Dad added, Since you didn’t want a party, Aiden arranged to have his on your return date. Kind of a joint celebration.” 

As if sensing us, Aiden turned, his eyes meeting mine

My heart skipped

Despite preparing myself for this moment all summer, I felt my courage wavering

Aiden started toward us, but Madison appeared, sliding her arm through his

Brooklyn! You’re back! I’m so glad we can finally meet properly. I always saw you two together, but never got the chance to introduce myself even though we shared so many classes.” 

Her politeness demanded a response. I managed a tight smile and a nod

Aiden looked uncomfortable. She’s nothing special,he said stiffly. Just a stubborn kid. Thought 

she might stay hidden in Boston forever.” 

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Backup Girl No More: Adios To My VCard and My First Love 

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Chapter 11 

I stayed silent, words failing me

Madison’s silvér evening gown sparkled with every movement, making her glow. She looked perfect 

beside him

I glanced down at my travel outfit white tee, jeans, sneakers, messy hair looking like I’d just rolled 

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