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Critic novel Chapter 22

Drake is so busy on his office, he read all my stories and pick the ones he likes for possible movies. He got 6 on his hands. He is so proud to successfully establish a company after just a year of his resignation it is now known to his previous company the success showering on him on the entertainment industry. Even Vikki definitely heard about it.

Sis, can you fix some part of this script I want it to have more romantic scenes. And the ending should be them together not somebody else. Drake ordered me.

So you want Provinciana, you know the story of this is really simple. When I'm doing this script, Im thinking of the beautiful scenery in the province so you have to give emphasis on your settings and common provincial activities. This has little romance on the story but I wanna cater more the lifestyle in the province which most people fall in love with most of the time they fall in love in the place and lifestyle not only the people, you know. I told him, to rationalize my story.

I get you but I want it with more romance I think that is what people will root for. The place is secondary.

Andrei and Lisa came, Drake asked their say on this topic. They both agree with Drake. They talk as if nothing happened. This two has no shame at all, ahey can still manage to show up their face to me, and talk as if nothing happened.

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