Here's the revised translation considering language and cultural nuances:
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However, darkness still enveloped everything within sight!
Not a soul to be seen!
Elysia was on high alert, a wave of fear washing over her.
Though she could hear someone, there was no one in sight. Her mind immediately jumped to the notion of a ghost... disheveled hair, ghastly pale face, floating mid-air, drifting aimlessly.
"Who's there? Who's calling me?!"
All around her was dead silent, no response. Elysia tried to muster courage with a fierce tone,
"Quit playing games, show yourself! Or I'll scream for help!"
The pleasant male voice echoed again, closer this time, "Elysia, what a lovely name, suits you perfectly! I like it!"
Still, she could see no one!
Elysia's heart pounded, her skin crawled,
"Who are you?! Show yourself!"
It was as if the stranger hadn't heard her, his voice soft, asking,
"Afraid he'll recognize your son?"
Elysia froze, "What?!"
Ignoring her question, he offered, "I can help you."
"...Help with what?!"
"I can help keep this secret forever, ensure he never discovers your secret."
Something clicked in Elysia's mind, her heartbeat skyrocketed, "I have no secrets!"
"Oh? Isn't your child his as well? How's that not a secret?"
Elysia gasped, eyes wide in shock, "You!!!"
The man chuckled,
"Curious how I know? That's not important. What matters is, I know your son is also his."
"You're spouting nonsense! My son is mine alone, he has nothing to do with him!"
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The readers' comments on the novel: Hitched & Hitched Again: A Comedy of Marital Mayhem
For real you have been too slow in updates...
Hey please no more hitching yes I know am hitched but save me 🥺...
Hitched and hitched again indeed I am hitched too with the drama but please 🙏🏽 upload more not forget you guys...
Now am left in suspense , I guess I have to take a nap till the next update But the book is good . I had taken long time without reading a thrilling content that could keep me looking 👀 till sunset , so I give you thumbs up...
Oh, it should be Keit's doing, I am wondering why he do this thing he might be related to the Bradford or he's one of Bradford's enemy sons take revenge. Thanks for the update greatly appreciated :))...
What happen to the admin who translated this book why there's no update for a long time, please please post a new chapter, we greatly appreciate :)) Thanks in advance...
I still believe Zane is the mysterious man ........
My instinct told me that the mysterious guy is ZANE...
Why the translator always used the word stepdad this made me confused coz Tarquin is not their stepdad Tarquin is their biological dad ........
AHHHHHH the man is really stupid ..... Thanks for the update morex6 please :)...