My Aloof Sisters Asked for My Forgiveness novel Chapter 418
“Unbelievable!”
Cheers erupted from Henry and his group as they saw Tyler’s punch send Elijah flying. Their enthusiasm was impossible to contain.
Ever since Elijah’s arrival in Grayvale, he had gone around challenging young martial artists, often humiliating and belittling them after his victories. Many had held grudges toward him.
His defeat at Tyler’s hands was a long-awaited moment of justice.
“See that? This is the strength of Gryavale’s young prodigies! You guys sure talked big. What happened? Not even one of you could hold your own! Where did all that confidence go?” mocked the martial artists of Grayvale.
“We’ve still got one fighter who hasn’t stepped in yet, and you’re all down for the count. How embarrassing is that?”
While the capital’s prodigies celebrated with jeers and taunts, the outsiders fell silent. Their faces turned dark with shame.
“We should leave,” one of them muttered.
And so, amidst the mockery, they slinked away without Elijah.
Their injuries were severe. Some might not even be able to compete in the upcoming martial arts competition.
Elijah stood frozen. He did not care about his disheveled state.
He could not believe he had been defeated by Tyler.
He had come here to defeat Dustin, yet he had not even earned the right to challenge him. Tyler alone had been enough to crush him.
The blow to his pride was unbearable. Just days ago, Tyler had been no match for him.
“You can’t even beat one of my men. What makes you think you can challenge me?” Dustin asked with a smirk.
It was not often that Dustin taunted anyone, but Elijah had brought it on himself.
Elijah clenched his fists, and his expression darkened with malice.
Henry and his group laughed openly, which added to his humiliation.
Moments later, Elijah stood straight while clutching his chest. He shot one last venomous glare at the crowd before turning and leaving.
“Elijah,” Dustin called after him.
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Nice one...
Shitty ending but considering overall I give the book .05 out of 5 stars. You used the same plot to many times, too many translation errors, even at the end you screwed around with the font and color because who knows why, the title had nothing to do with the story do I need to continue...
Just move to the enemy and let the snipers kill him for you Dustin. Use him as your shield easy peasy Mac n cheesey....
Tell hell hall said get his ass out here now or I will kill everyone here you have 10 seconds to do what I said. 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,0 to late...
Why does Dustin still think he owes his adoptive dad a debt? Sure he saved his life and help raise, taught martial arts etc... till his death but Dustin stayed on and put his life at risk and invested his time and money into his 5 daughters up until they came across their biological brother and kicked him out. Treat him like a thieving dog and have attempted numerous times to kill him. He finally showed some common sense by imprisoning the 1 sister and killing her cousin yet he lets the others slide. With his status and power I would have already killed them off or at the very least taken them and imprisoned them like the 1 and tortured the mom into spilling everything she knows and getting my rightful inheritance, but the author has to drag it out....
He said to mutilate the body and burn it why not start with beheading it and taking it back to show the city and place it as an offering to his family? That's what a great MC would have done....
Lame you change the name of the characters and use the same ole trope how many time are you going to use it? First it was the Langley sisters, then the McCall girl I believe this is the second or third time with Shawna. You need new material author...
Oh my not the weak who the MC showed mercy by not killing him because of some honor bound duty to a dead guy makes a comeback and forces the MC into a corner before the mc finally kills him arc 🤣...
🤣 now this is better just because I took her virginity doesn't mean I'm responsible for her. Love it....
When will he introduce his one eye willy for them to pet, stroke and kiss?...