Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 100
Chapter 0100
“Boss,” one of the men said, “What can I do for you?”
“Send me a picture of Judy,” Ethan demanded.
“Judy?” He asked. “Judy Montague?”
Ethan’s brows furrowed,
“Yes, the one you kidnapped earlier,” Ethan said, losing his patience. “I want a picture of her. Not one hair better be hurt on her head,”
There was a long stretch of silence on the other end for a moment before the man cleared his throat and responded.
“We don’t have her, Sir.”
“What the hell do you mean you don’t have her??” Ethan asked through his teeth. “You were supposed to kidnap her in the city earlier.”
“Well, we were sent to a location via text message to meet up with Miss Judy, but when we got there, she never showed up,” he explained, “We didn’t ask any questions; we just left. We honestly thought you changed your mind.”
“You’re telling me that Judy isn’t with you??” Ethan asked, panic rising in his chest.
“We haven’t seen her,” the man replied.
Ethan almost crushed the phone in his hands when he heard this information. He quickly pulled the car over to the side of the road, throwing it in park.
“Send me the location you went to meet her,” he said, trying to take calming breaths.
“Yes, sir,” he heard on the other end.
He hung up the phone and waited with bated breath for his phone to go off. He received the location and immediately knew where it was. He quickly drove to that location, his heart practically in his throat. If his trustworthy packmates didn’t have Judy, then who the fuck did? Where was she? And why wasn’t Irene answering her damn phone?? He was shocked that she hadn’t tried to call him back.
He reached the location in record time and quickly got out. He could still smell Judy’s scent lingering nearby, but it was obvious she hadn’t been here in a while. His eyes narrowed when he noticed that some businesses had street cameras.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...