Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 157
Chapter 0157
“If I knew, I wouldn’t be asking,” I said exasperated. Talk to me, Matt,” I said more softly as I walked closer to his bed. “Why are you upset with me?”
Matt swallowed and I could see the moisture in his eyes; it broke my heart. Whatever was wrong… It
serious.
“What did you say to Judy that made her not want to see me?”
I raised my brows at his question.
“What?” I asked.
I was
“Before I passed out, after the Epi… you were angry, and I remember you saying something to her. Then everything went dark, and I woke up here. It’s been days since that, Dad, and Judy hasn’t come to see me once. I couldn’t even smell her scent when I woke up, which means she hadn’t been here at all. You had to have said something to her to make her stay away from me.”
Even young wolves had an excellent sense of smell, and I knew he would be able to pick up Judy’s scent anywhere. He was around her often enough that her scent probably became normal to him. I wasn surprised that he’d be able to smell if she was here or not… I just didn’t think he would truly care that much.
“Matt, you have to understand, I only did this for your own good. Judy is dangerous
“Dangerous??” Matt gasped, his eyes large and turning red with anger. It was a look I had never seen before. “Judy wouldn’t hurt anyone unless they truly deserved it, Dad, and you know that.”
I sighed and sat down on the edge of his bed.
“Look…” I began, not sure what I wanted to say, but I knew I needed to say something to calm him. “ Judy was the one who fed you that sandwich, Matt. She was careless and because of her actions, I almost lost you. I can’t have someone like that around my family.”
“So, you told her to stay away??” Matt asked, his eyes wide. “So, I was right. That’s why she hasn’t come to see me… you scared her away. The only tutor I ever liked…”
“I can find you another tutor-”
“There is no one like her and you know that,” Matt shouted…
I was stunned speechless, which never happens. He had never raised his voice at me like this before… he had never spoken to anyone like this before. I couldn’t believe he was standing up for her after what she did.
“You almost died, Matt,” I said a bit louder and way harsher than I meant.
“It wasn’t her fault!”
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...