Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 167
Chapter 0167
Gavin’s POV
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After Judy went back to her room, I returned to the parlor where Richard was speaking with his wife. They both looked nervous as they discussed what they were going to do If I did happen to pull my funding. Without my funding, they would go bankrupt and they would lose almost everything. They would have to use the profits from their business to pay back the money I invested.
I turned to Michelle and gave her a small smile; she watched me warily and I knew she was only worried for her daughter.
“How about you rest as well? I need to speak with the cash’s alone for a moment,” I told her softly.
She nodded and soon, she left.
I turned to the Cash family, my eyes narrowed.
Richard silenced his conversation and then turned to Kelsey.
“Leave us,” he ordered.
She pressed her lips in a thin line and folded her arms across her chest.
“Can I stay?” She asked him.
“No,” he said firmly and without hesitation. “We need to speak with Alpha Landry alone.”
She pouted, but she didn’t argue any further. She soon left, but not before batting her lashes up at me and winking. I recoiled at the sight and remained quiet until she was gone. I turned to face Richard and Meredith who both looked small as they stared back at me.
“I’m not pleased with what I had seen here tonight,” I said to them. I felt like I was scolding a couple of children. “How can I allow my daughter to marry into a family I cannot trust?”
“You can trust us, Alpha,” Richard assured me. “It was only a misunderstanding. It will be dealt with properly.”
“Are you forgetting that I funded most of your business and I can take it away in an instant? You’d have to pay back every dime I gave you,” I reminded him. I funded most of the businesses around the Werewolf Kingdom, but only the ones I saw potential in. They were investments and they mostly did me well.
Some other Lycans funded some as well, but not nearly as many as I did.
If I were to take it away, they would have to pay me back every dime invested.
“Of course, I didn’t forget Alpha…”
“If there’s any further harm to either Judy or her mother, there will be consequences to those actions, understood?”
“What the fuck do you think you’re doing?” She asked, staring at the bag on my bed.
“I’m leaving,” I told her without looking at her.
“The hell you are,” she growled, grabbing my bag, and ripping it out of my hands. I was so stunned by her movements that I was frozen as I watched my bagly across the room and hit the wall with a loud thud. “You aren’t going anywhere. You have nowhere to go. You are nothing but a useless orphan and you’re going to stay here until you die, bitch!”
I narrowed my eyes at her, my temper rising with each breath I took.
“I’m staying with a friend,” I told her through my teeth. “My mother already gave me her blessing and
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....