Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 202
Chapter 0202
Judy’s POV
I have no idea what I’m getting myself into. This was probably the west idea that I could possibly have. But I promised Nan that 1 would come with her to this party and that was exactly what I was going to da “Thanks for the ride, Leroy,” I told him as we got closer to the school.
“It’s my job,” he reminded me. “You don’t have to thank me.”
I shrugged.
“But still,” I murmured.
He grinned and glanced at me through the rearview mirror.
“Well, if you need me to pick you up early, let me know,”
wouldn’t blame you for wanting to bail sooner than late told me. “I know how these parties are and I
I nodded, appreciating him so much for that. As he parked the car, I thanked him one last time before leaving and walking towards the student lounge where I promised I’d meet Nan. We were planning on walking of the party together.
When I didn’t see her, I waited. I sat on the stairway, not caring if I had dirtied my dress and I continued to wait for her for what felt like an hour. I glanced at the time with a frown; I thought she wanted to meet at 8. It was nearing 9.
Had she gone to the party without me?
Just as I was about to stand and walk to the frat house by myself, I heard my name being called.
I turned to see Nan rushing towards me. She was beautiful in her black dress; it was super short and showed off her legs and cleavage perfectly. It certainly put my simple dress to shame. Nan had always been beautiful and there was a part of me that was envious of it.
When she got closer, I saw that her eyes were a little red.
Had she been crying?
“Are you okay?” I asked her when she finally reached me.
She
gave me a smile, but it didn’t reach her eyes.
“Yeah,” she said breathlessly. “Sorry, I’m late. I ran a little behind tonight. I had to go shopping for this dress and got back a little later than I planned.”
I didn’t trust any of these frat guys, especially not with my friend.
“Let’s get some beer!” She said.
I crinkled my nose.
“I hate beer,” I muttered.
“It’s a frat party, Judy. They don’t have much else,” she told me.
I sighed and followed her through the house, and we reached the kitchen. There were a ton of coolers set out filled with different types of beer. She grabbed one of the cans and handed me another.
When we cracked it open, she held up the can to me.
“To our first frat party!” she cheered.
I couldn’t help but laugh and clink my can with hers. We sipped the beer, and I nearly gagged at the taste. I truly hated beer, but maybe I could learn to love it.
The music was much louder in the living room; there were a bunch of people in the center of the room dancing. Most of them were already drunk. Some of the girls were grinding against some of the frat boys and they were soaking it up.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....