Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 24
Chapter 0024
Adam nodded and grabbed the tablet, handing it to Ethan.
“I’ll return this later. Thank you for your help, Adam,” Ethan said kindly before leaving the kitchen.
“Thank you for the warning about Miss Judy. I’ll keep a close eye on her,” Adam retorted. “I’ll see if there’s someone more capable for the position.
Ethan nodded, a smile playing on his lips.
Adam all but forgot about that conversation until a couple of hours later when he was searching the entire house for Matt but couldn’t find him. He wasn’t usually hanging out in his bedroom at this time, but that was the only place he hadn’t looked. Ethan and Irene were long gone for the day, so the house remained quiet and fairly empty besides the staff running around
Adam knocked on Matt’s bedroom door and heard him huffing about. Frowning, he opened the door and spotted him on his bed with his tablet in his hands.
“Master Matthew, how did you get that?” Adam asked, stepping into his bedroom.
“Get out! I’m busy!” Matt scowled; his eyes glued on the tablet.
“Master Matthew, I insist that you hand that over right away. You know you aren’t allowed to have that right now. Your tutor will be here soon, and you need to be prepared.
“I said get out!!” Matt hissed as he grabbed a picture frame with sharp corners and threw it as hard as he could across the room, aiming directly at Adam’s face.
Adam was able to get out of the way quickly and the frame shattered on the wall behind him. He whipped around to face Matt who kept his attention on the game.
“Matt” he tried to say but Matt grabbed more pictures and other hard objects and started to throw them at Adam, ordering him to leave his room that instant.
Adam felt he had no choice but to leave. When Matt got like that, he was dangerous and would stop at nothing to get what he wanted. The only one who was able to calm him and put some order in his life was Gavin and that was because of his Alpha aura.
However, Gavin had a meeting this afternoon and was unavailable.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...