Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 304
Chapter 0304
Third Person POV
Nan wasn’t sure what she was doing. She had been a complete mess for days and she could feel herself spiraling out of control.
“My cousin really likes you,” Mac told her during lunch the day before. “He thought you were really cute and funny and wanted me to find out if you were seeing anyone.
At this point, Nan and Judy arrived in this country the day prior and Nan met Mac and Tyler later that evening. She met Kelsey at their current lunch. She was currently watching their exchange, her eyes darting back and forth as they spoke to one another like she was watching a volleyball game.
Seeing anyone? Nan thought to herself as she processed Mac’s question. Was she seeing anyone? Her situation with Chester wasn’t exactly black and white. Chester was her fated mate, but it seems he doesn’t want her. He’s too busy having sex with anyone that has a pulse. Would going out with a guy while on a trip out of the country really matter to Chester?
Nan was so sure that Chester would end up rejecting her once she got back anyway, that nothing really mattered. Maybe it was the rebound or the fact that she was on her third martini, but she found herself shaking her head.
“I’m not seeing anyone,” she said softly, picking up her glass and taking another sip of her martini.
Mac’s smile lit up the entire room as she clapped her hands together.
“He’s going to be so happy,” she cooed. “Do you want to get together tonight? Tyler wants to go to dinner and thought we should all go together.”
Nan nodded, nibbling on her lower lip.
“Yeah, that sounds great,” she agreed.
Since that conversation, an entire day has passed. At dinner last night, Tyler was very kind to her. He sat close to her and talked to mostly her. She tried to pretend to be interested in the things he said, but her mind kept returning to Chester. Many times, she cursed herself.
Today, though, Tyler had been acting strangely. Almost possessively, he kept touching her, wrapping his arms around her, whispering in her ear, kissing her. They shared a kiss the night before, but Nan stopped it before it became too much. She couldn’t stomach the thought of being with another while she had a mate, even if said mate didn’t want her. But Tyler didn’t seem to get the hint; he continued to touch and kiss her despite how many times she’s pulled away. It’s like he had a silent claim on her, and then that stunt he pulled when he answered Judy for her and then denied Judy an invitation to come along.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...