Gavin’s POV
Judy looked so small as she stood inside her little condo. Luna Lucy stood behind her, her eyes wide as she looked back and forth between the two of us before settling on her mate, who still stood in front of me. I could see the uncertainty in Judy’s eyes, the fear, the resentment, the anger, and the pain. It tore something inside of me, making my wolf whimper pathetically. It took everything I had not to close the distance between us and wrap her in my arms. But I had questions that she needed to answer.
“We’ll give you some privacy,” Sampson said, holding his hand out for his mate, who gave Judy a quick questioning glance.
Judy finally pulled her gaze from me and gave her a subtle nod; it was so small I would have missed it if my eyes weren’t glued to her.
Lucy gave Judy a quick squeeze.
“We’ll talk tomorrow?” She asked.
Judy nodded.
“I’ll be talking to you tomorrow as well, Judy. We never finished our conversation from earlier,” Sampson said, narrowing his eyes at her.
I had to fight the urge to growl at him for his tone; I didn’t like how he was speaking to her, Alpha or not. But I knew I couldn’t cause a scene right now; that wasn’t what Judy wanted, and that wasn’t what I was here to do. I was here to talk and get answers, and that’s exactly what I was going to do.
Judy swallowed, her throat moving as she did so. She nodded, and I could see the hint of nerves bubbling inside of her. I had the urge to protect her, but I stood my ground, waiting for Sampson to take Lucy’s hand and walk out of the condo.
Once they were gone, leaving me alone with Judy, I remained at the entrance, her door still open, and Judy staring at me.
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
My main problem with this story is the inconsistencies in the characters of FL and ML. They're presented as all these things at the start but the whole way through they don't behave the way their characters should. It's like they have multiple personalities that take over for different chunks of the story to push the plot forward. It's just so hard to stay connected to the characters and story when they just don't add up 😔...
I wish he'd given her a pampering session and hair/makeup/outfit before he launched this plan 🤦 some relaxing and glamming up would have done wonders after what she just went through and considering her condition 👀...
I’m so happy. I love where the story is going. Finally they are together. Finally they both marked each other. At this point I’m satisfied lol....
I know this will be an unpopular opinion, but this is too much. Too rushed. I feel the writers finally read all the user comments because they were getting hammered in the reviews. It's obvious they have put a much better writer in charge of concluding the story. However, I don't like how rushed it is. They should have done all of these things 50 chapters ago. It shouldn't have been a "let's all throw it all together so we can wrap it up into a happy-ever-after bow." Don't get me wrong, I'm glad to see the story is moving forward. However, there are still too many loose ends remaining....
Well i guess this site is a bust....
Got this girl glued !!...
Waiting for updates...
Did the uploader just quit their job?...
The book is up to chapter 646 chop chop book boy...
Here's a site with the new chapters. Don't add the spaces when typing it into the address bar. writers . 8171bisp . com / my - wolf - 638...