Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 62
Chapter 0062
Judy’s POV
“Oh, hey Judy,” Irene said as she recovered from Ethan’s hold. Her cheeks were flushed and that smile never left her lips. She ran her fingers through her hair and gave me a sheepish look as she stepped into the parlor.
Matt lifted his gaze from his homework to look up at his sister.
“How are things going in here?” She asked, taking the loveseat across the room, Ethan sat beside her, his fingers entwined with hers. They were all lovey–dovey and close to one another. I I wondered if she knew that he was over at my house last night while she was desperately trying to call him.
“Great, just finishing up some Algebra,” I answered, turning back to Matt. I tried my best to ignore Irene and Ethan while he whispered sweet nothing into her ear, making her giggle.
I couldn’t help but feel the annoyance creep up my spine. I could feel Ethan’s gaze landing on me periodically, but I just straightened my spine and focused on my work at hand.
“I brought some pastries,” one of the maids said, walking into the parlor. She sat a tray on the coffee table for us all to share.
“Thank you, Maria,” Irene said politely.
The maid nodded and left the room moments later. The
Ethan stood and walked over to the coffee table, lowering himself as he took a look at the pastries. They were scones and small sugar cookies. They admittedly smelled delicious. He picked up a couple of cookies and brought them back to the loveseat he shared with Irene. He draped a protective arm around her, and I watched as he brought the cookie to her lips,
She smiled as she opened her mouth and bit into the cookie.
“Gag,” Matt muttered, rolling his eyes. “Can’t you do that somewhere else?”
Irene frowned at him as Ethan wiped a crumb off the side of her lips, bringing his finger to his mouth and licking the crumb off his finger, his eyes lingeringon mine. I pressed my lips in a thin line and glared at him; he was doing this on purpose to get a rise out of me and I wasn’t going to let it work. “You don’t have to watch us,” Irene snapped back.
She snuggled into Ethan who kissed the top of her head.
Not for the first time, I wondered if Ethan had something to do with the fact that my dead found out about my dyslexia. At this point, I wouldn’t be surprised if he did something as cruel as that to try and push me out of college. The thought made my stomach twist and turn and was suddenly feeling sick.
I turned away from them and drowned myself in Matt’s work. We worked tirelessly for the next hour while Irene and Ethan continued to snuggle and flirt on the loveseat. It’s almost like they didn’t have anything better to do with their time.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...