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The 99th Game Was Mine All Along novel Chapter 8

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Outside the burning mansion, Latigi’s friends shrieked with excitement at the growing inferno, wildly snapping photos and videos on their phones like it was a concert finale

Holy shit, revenge ninety nine is going to be LEGENDARY!Tyler howled, capturing an Instagram story of the flames

Tinally, Luigi can dump that clingy bitch and on with his life!Blake slapped his knee, grinning 

maniacally

move 

When we rescue her, I’m going to record her ugly crying face and blast it all over TikTok. Let the whole fucking campus see what a pathetic mess she really is!Josh laughed, already planning his caption

The hellish red glow illuminated their faces like demons at a bonfire, casting long, distorted shadows behind them

Standing slightly apart from the group, Luigi listened to their callous banter with growing discomfort. Something felt deeply wrong

His mind kept replaying Ariana’s face from moments earlierthat strange, peaceful expression. Those words that now seemed so final

Waitshe’d been abnormally calm, hadn’t she

Every previous anniversary, Ariana had practically vibrated with excitement. She’d plan for weeks. creating Pinterest boards, texting him countdown updates, handling every detail personally with almost manic enthusiasm

Luigi had always been happy to let her take over. Why waste effort on someone who was just a means to an end? He’d even internally justified his coldnessif she hadn’t humiliated Leila, she wouldn’t be with him anyway

But tonight had been completely different. Ariana had been unsettlingly quiet

During the entire drive, she’d sat silently beside him, no nervous chatter, no excited questions

Beyond those haunting final words, she hadn’t once asked about his surprise.She’d been like a marionette with cut stringscompliant, empty, resigned

And now that he thought about ithe’d been gone nearly twenty minutes, the fire had been raging for almost as longand she hadn’t called or texted even once

The realization hit him like a bucket of ice water. Luigi frantically pulled out his phone

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He refreshed the screen over and over, desperation growing with each swipe No calls. No texts. No hysterical voicemails from Ariana

His heart hammered against his ribs as cold dread spread through his limbs

He looked up at the burning building, truly seeing the enormity of the flames for the first time. Orange and red tongues licked three stories high, the heat intense enough to feel on his face from hundred feet 

away

Ariana 

he whispered, as fragments of her presence in his life flashed through his mindher laughter echoing in their apartment, the way she’d leave little notes in his textbooks, how she’d waited hours in the rain once when his car broke down

Without consciously deciding to move, he bolted toward the inferno

What the fuck, Luigi! Where are you going?Derek shouted, as the group moved to block him

Just as Luigi opened his mouth to respond, a deafening explosion ripped through the night, the concussive force knocking them backward

BOOM

A massive fireball erupted from the roof of the mansion, sending a mushroom cloud of flame and debris spiraling into the black sky. The heat wave hit them like a physical wall

The group’s expressions transformed from drunken celebration to genuine horror in an instant

Holy shitthat wasn’t supposed to happen!Blake yelled, suddenly sober

As they stood frozen in shock, a series of secondary explosions followed, one after another. The sound was like artillery fire, each blast more violent than the last

Thick black smoke billowed outward as glass shattered. Burning chunks of wood and concrete rained down around them, forcing them to cover their heads

ARIANA!Luigi screamed, his mind consumed by a single thought: she was still inside that hellish 

inferno

He lunged forward with frantic desperation, only to be tackled by his friends

You’ll fucking die if you go in there!Tyler shouted, pinning him to the ground

We called 911! Fire rescue is coming!Blake yelled, his face ashen with fear

Sheshe’s gotta be okay,Josh stammered, no trace of his earlier cruelty. They’ll get 

out!” 

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Luigi’s eyes were wild, fixed on the towering inferno. In his mind, he and hear her eating the himcould imagine her trapped, choking, terrified. Every memony of her kindness, hey deson tr he’d taken for granted, crashed over him in a tidal wave of regret

GET OFF ME!he roared, throwing his friends aside with strength born of pure adrenaline, launching himself toward the flames

LUIGI STOP!” 

BOOM

Another massive explosion rocked the foundation of the building sending a shower of tarting debris in all directions. The roar of the fire grew deafening, drowning out everything but the hammering of he own heart

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