Dahlia left the country with a heavy heart, and during that time, Charles' deep sadness was as clear as day to everyone around him. Consequently, not only did Charles strongly hate Evelyn, but their group of friends also shared the sentiment. They held a strong grudge against Evelyn despite her being Charles' partner and the mother of his daughter. None of them even bothered to visit her.
Brody was speaking up for Charles because he felt it was unfair. However, the more he talked, the more he noticed that Charles' expression didn't lighten up; instead, it seemed to darken with storm clouds. Charles' look was all too telling.
“You haven’t fallen for Evelyn, have you?” Brody asked, staring at Charles as if he'd seen a ghost. Even he couldn't believe he was asking such a thing. Charles had spent all those years searching for Dahlia, finally finding her and treating her like the apple of his eye, showering her with love and affection like a treasured gem. Dahlia was the only one Charles had eyes for. How on earth could he fall for Evelyn, someone with such a scheming nature?
Charles shot Brody a look that said, "Are you kidding me?" How could he possibly have fallen for Evelyn?
“Exactly, there’s just no way you’d fall for Evelyn!” Brody must have lost his mind to even bring it up. Charles didn’t say anything more, which Brody took as an unspoken agreement.
“Honey, come keep me company.” A sweet voice chimed in, and a pair of soft arms wrapped around Brody’s arm. It was the girl he brought along for the night. Charles wasn’t in the mood anymore, so Brody decided not to bother him further. He followed the woman to another part of the room, joining in on the games they were playing.
She watched Brody not even pause because of her arrival. Instead, he pulled the woman closer, right there in front of Allison, and bit the piece of napkin with those lips that had kissed Allison countless times before, nearly touching the woman's lips. This sight pierced Allison's heart. She fought to keep her emotions in check but couldn’t stop her eyes from welling up.
This was the man she had loved for eight long years. Everyone around her knew her love for Brody. She loved him so deeply that she lost herself. All she knew and loved was Brody. She wished she could always be by his side, like a part of him.
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...