“No!”
Evelyn’s eyes were bloodshot. Her heart-wrenching scream echoed from deep within her.
“Charlie…” She whispered, stumbling out of bed in a frenzy, rushing to the window with all her might.
Instinctively, she reached out, not realizing she was already halfway out the window.
The danger didn’t register; her only thought was to save her Charlie. But it was too late. She was just a moment too slow, helplessly watching as the necklace arced through the night sky, disappearing into the shimmering water below.
“Evelyn, you’re on the fifth floor! Are you out of your mind?”
Charles was beside himself. His heart was in his throat. He hadn’t expected Evelyn to act so recklessly.
Thank goodness he reacted in time, pulling her back from the edge. He clutched her waist, eyes blazing with anger.
Why was she risking her life for a necklace? It was unbelievable!
Who gave her that necklace? Why did it mean so much?
Just as Charles was about to demand answers, Evelyn, eyes blazing with fury, shoved him hard.
The push was full of resentment. Charles staggered back against the windowsill.
Evelyn’s mind was on Charlie, and she didn’t spare Charles a glance as she turned and bolted.
“Evelyn!”
Charles snapped into action, sprinting after her. He was a second too late; the elevator doors closed right in his face.
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...