“Ugh!” Evelyn started coughing intensely, her body heaving as she struggled for air. Charles's face immediately shifted to one of worry, his eyes filled with concern as he gently patted her back.
Evelyn brushed him off and hurried into the bathroom. She managed to cough up whatever was left inside her, though it wasn’t much. The emptiness in her stomach only made her feel worse. It took some time before the coughing finally subsided.
When she stood up, she saw Charles at the door, holding a warm towel in one hand and a glass of warm water in the other. “Here, rinse your mouth.”
Feeling awful after throwing up, Evelyn took the items without a word, gulping down a mouthful to rinse her mouth. Charles stepped closer, using the warm towel to gently wipe the tears that had crept from the corners of her eyes. He spoke softly, “Eve, does it have to be like this? Can’t we just get along?”
He wanted to return to the way things used to be, to give her everything she once wanted, bit by bit. Evelyn heard him and slowly lifted her head to meet his eyes. His message was clear: let time heal, let go of Charlie’s death, and stop clinging to the past. How ridiculous.
In response, Evelyn spat the rinse water onto Charles’s shirt. He looked down at the soaked fabric, his expression darkening, yet he didn’t retaliate. He just wanted to ease the tension, not make it worse. Holding back his emotions, Charles tolerated Evelyn’s provocations, speaking in a quieter tone, “You must be hungry. I had some soup ordered. It’ll be here soon. Why not wait in the dining room?”
Evelyn gave no reply, merely brushing past him as she left the room. Charles removed his wet shirt, tossing it into the laundry basket, and walked out bare-chested. Even after two years, his physique was still impeccable—perfect V-shaped torso and clearly defined abs.
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...