Charles let out a cold chuckle, ignoring Evelyn's desperate attempt to hold her ground. Despite her fierce grip, he started peeling her fingers off the doorframe one by one.
Evelyn clung to the doorway with every ounce of strength, her nails nearly digging into the wood. But no matter how hard she tried, it was useless. Charles pried her fingers away and, right in front of her, slammed the door shut without a hint of mercy.
As the door clicked shut, darkness swallowed her whole. Evelyn immediately reached for the doorknob, but it was already locked tight from the outside. A wave of long-buried fear surged within her, draining the color from her face.
Panicked, Evelyn pounded on the door. "Charles, open up! You can't keep me here without reason!" she shouted, her voice echoing in the silence. But there was no answer. "Charles, can you hear me? Let me out! You have no right to do this!"
Only silence replied. Evelyn trembled, fear gnawing at her insides. She tried to stay calm, fumbling in the dark for the light switch. Her hands shook, but she finally found it and flicked it on.
"Click—" However, nothing happened. Darkness remained. The basement wires had been cut.
Evelyn's knees buckled, and she slid down the wall. The hope that had flickered briefly was snuffed out, leaving her in sheer panic. She continued banging on the door. "Charles, open up!"
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: The Day Our Promise Breaks (Charles and Evelyn)
What a bad novel. Evil deeds rules the entire story, no ending, villains characters succeed, no way out for the good people. I was hoping for better twists but disappointed again and again. Time close the book for me, no more, enough....
When will Evelyn's sufferings end? You mean to say evil rules the world? No longer funny, the twists are getting ridiculous....
Wow Finally! Thanks!...
More chapters please...