Haynes' face darkened. "Keen, zip it."
Keen flinched and instinctively hid behind Rachel.
Seeing this, Rachel quickly interjected, "Hey, Haynie, Keen's just a kid. Don't be so hard on him. Besides..."
"You've always held Keen to high standards, and he's never let you down. He's top of the class in kindergarten."
"Keen's competitive, sure. He wants to be the best at everything, which is understandable. But Ms. Cameron..."
Rachel glanced at Stella and quietly added, "Having such an exceptional son like Keen should inspire you to better yourself too. As parents, we shouldn't be the ones holding our kids back."
Haynes seemed to mull it over, his dark eyes clouded with thought, and he fell silent.
But Marvin stepped forward and protested, "Stella won't hold anyone back! She's amazing!"
Keen snorted, unable to hold back. "She's my mom. Don't you think I'd know if she's amazing or not?"
"Marvin, maybe you should find someone else to team up with for the competition, unless you want to end up crying when you lose."
Marvin jabbed a finger at Keen, his usual timidness replaced by fire. "Shut up about Stella! You're the one who'll be crying when you realize no one cares about your stupid grades! What's the point of being 'perfect' if you treat your own mom like trash? Newsflash—people don't laugh at losers. They laugh at spoiled brats like you who don't know how to love anyone!"Keen was taken aback by Marvin's intensity, momentarily at a loss.
Rachel frowned, addressing Ms. Cameron. "I know you don't like me checking in on Keen, but Marvin's just a kid. It's not fair to teach him to say such things to attack your own son."
"If Ms. Cameron wants to take care of Keen herself, I assure you, I won't step in anymore."
Stella almost wanted to applaud Rachel's speech.
She insinuated Stella was manipulating Marvin like a puppet, turning him against his own blood—all while accusing her of neglecting Keen, yet refusing to allow anyone else to step in.
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