Sure! Here’s your text adapted into a Western-style English novel scene. I replaced the Chinese cultural elements with suitable Western equivalents and made the dialogue and narration natural, lively, and idiomatic for a native English-speaking audience:
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“Alright. Thanks for your help, David.”
“Just doing my job.”
After seeing David off, Rebecca White turned and headed inside. She’d barely stepped into the foyer when her phone buzzed.
It was Eddy—again. They’d only just seen each other earlier today.
“Hey, Eddy?” Rebecca answered, puzzled. “What’s up?”
“Rebecca. I’m outside Rosewood Manor, but I can’t get in… I really need to talk to you.”
What?
Rebecca spun around, glancing toward the front door.
He was here? At her place?
“How did you even—?”
How did he know where she lived?
“I’m sorry,” Eddy said, sounding sheepish. “I… kind of followed you.”
“Excuse me?” Rebecca’s brow furrowed; she was definitely not pleased. “Why would you do that?”
Eddy rushed to explain, “After we met this afternoon, you left so quickly—I didn’t get a chance to say what I needed to. Your mom asked me to drop something off for you, so I brought it over.”
Just to give her something from her mom?
Did he really have to follow her for that?
A second’s thought told her he must’ve started tailing her right from the fried chicken place.
Still, if it was from her mom, she had to go get it.
“Fine. Wait there.”
Rebecca’s reply was curt. “I’ll come out and get it.”
“Okay,” Eddy answered, sounding resigned.
Rebecca stood in the foyer for a second, then walked out without even bothering to change her shoes. She jogged to the gate at the end of the drive, where Eddy’s car was parked by the curb.
He stuck his arm out the window and waved. “Rebecca! Over here!”
“Yeah.”
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