Critic novel Chapter 1

It was a noisy night at the house of Tara. Her brother who is staying with her on the same house brought some visitors.

A successful business deal needs a celebration, said Drake, Tara's brother while talking to his friends. Those men agreed with him like his followers in a cult. I should be joining them but none of those men interests me. After a while more of their office mates came including some girls. Their party grew even noisier. I went down to greet the newcomers for I know some of them, it would be impolite on my part if I ignore their arrival.

Girl your so slim, how do you keep this figure of yours?, Vikki asked. Vikki is the girlfriend of Drake. She's a sweet girl. I like her. Her style is so classy and she has a direction, quite a dreamer just like my brother Drake.

The night grows deeper and the party get even wilder. I have to scape from this crowd I still have a story to finish. I called Vikki to tell her I need to rest. Vikki I leave you everything here, I need to finish a story tonight, its due tommorow, your in charge in the kitchen now.

You can go but please take one last shot, girls join us. Cheers!

I have no choice but drink one more since Vikki is quite insistent.

Have a nice party everyone. I bid them goodbye then I went straight to my room. The house is big but I can still hear the noise even with the door close.

I tried to focus so hard to finish the last chapter of my story. Hope I give justice to the ending of this story.