Critic novel Chapter 2

Wazzup! I entered my directors office with this intro. My eyes are still dark but I came in with a smile. I'm done with the story, here it is! Read it and tell me which one you want to change.

Cool, said Jerry my director. He does movies and commercials also music videos when needed. We are friends for so long now, he is my source of millions. He loves my works, he turns it into movie and boom blockbuster hit. He is richer than me maybe 10x richer. He looks for producer to invest on our movies, he is also in charge of gathering artist to play the roles on my story. He is the man, litterally.

I will tell you on email what I think about this. Good news we have plenty of investors, since we had good ticket sales on our last movie, Jerry said.

Im excited to see my story comes alive, I told him. His face light up with a smile. You have those power in you to see things perfectly on your mind then make it in reality. Only you can do that, blemish free! I continued flattering him.

He smirked at me, Jerry automatically knows that I'm patronizing him.

Tara, you don't have to kiss my ass, you will get a good cut on this project as long as I like your script. So now you can go home, I will message you as soon as I finish reading it. Alright? Go home I still have a job, go to sleep and keep dreaming well. He pushed me outside the door, so I just waved at him goodbye on the other side of the glass door.