His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 24
When Zachary was driven back to the villa, it was already 3:00 am.
Stumbling into the bedroom, he collapsed onto the bed, barely able to keep his eyes open.
He was jolted awake by a sharp pain in his stomach,
“Tessa, my stomach hurts,” he mumbled. “Get me some medicine.”
But there was no reply.
He called out again, “Tessa Tes
Suddenly, he sat up in bed, fully awake.
A wave of realization hit him that Tessa had moved out
Amb of loneliness and discomfort washed over him.
Clutching his stomach, he stumbled out of bed, desperately searching for the medicine, but it was nowhere to be found.
The pain was unbearable, so he called Emma.
Emma was startled when her phone rang
“Where’s the medicine for a stomach ache?” Zachary asked.
She took a deep breath, mentally reminding herself, “It’s okay. He pays well. A little less sleep won’t hurt.”
She glanced at the time, and it was 4:00 am
What was wrong with him? It was the middle of the night!
She took a few more deep breaths to calm herself before fording a polite tone. “The medicine cabinet is in Ms. Yates‘ room, on the top shelf.”
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Whoa! Hahahahahaha! Go, Sophia! Burn, stupid Rowena! Lol...
Sooo~ Chapters 310-318 were just a repeat of Jacqueline’s punishment, official expulsion from the Jacobson family, and arrest. With few changes since Tessa and Stephen are not together this time. So Tessa didn’t witness how Jacqueline was tortured at Stephen’s base, though at least Tessa was still called over and witnessed how Stephen officially expelled Jacqueline from the Jacobson family and how Stephen’s subordinate made Jacqueline grovel in front of Tessa. Lol. I hope Jacqueline’s really out of the story now....
Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...
What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...
I don’t like that Stephen is dropping Tessa. They could work together to go after James. But if this happens then I’ll stop reading....