His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 288
Wendy wiped her tears as she said, "Those who have followed me for a while know that I used to live abroad and only returned last year. After coming back, I got together with my first love."
Comments flooded the live chat.
"Is Mr. Gomez your first love?"
"Wow, so Mr. Gomez is your first love! No wonder you two are so sweet together. They say a man never forgets his first love."
Wendy glanced at the comments and nodded. "Yes, my first love is Mr. Gomez. He picked me up at the airport the day I came back, and we got back together that very night."
"Then what's this about a third party?"
She lowered her eyes without saying a word as silent tears streamed down her cheeks.
The viewers were heartbroken and immediately flooded the chat, cursing the so-called homewrecker.
"Don't cry! Who's the third party? Tell us, and we'll take care of her!"
"Yeah, if she loves being a side chick so much, let's see how long she can last. We'll roast her to ashes!"
"You're so beautiful. Mr. Gomez would never actually fall for someone else. That side chick is probably just desperate. Mr. Gomez's just fooling around. His heart still belongs to you."
"Gross. Knowing she's the third party and still going for it? She should just disappear."
"Don't cry, baby. My heart's breaking for you."
"Men are all the same. They get bored and move on. Don't be too soft on him."
"Come on, tell us who she is! I can't wait to tear her apart!"
Wendy knew the timing was right. She bit her lower lip and said, "The third party is Mr. Gomez's ex-girlfriend."
The chat exploded again.
"Wait, ex-girlfriend? Weren't you two each other's first love?"
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Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...
What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...
I don’t like that Stephen is dropping Tessa. They could work together to go after James. But if this happens then I’ll stop reading....
Whats wrong with the typing?? There a lot of weird words...
More frequent updates please...