In one of Grayvale’s most exclusive hotels, the younger generation of martial arts families often gathered. This was the same venue where Allison had once taken Dustin along to participate in several gambling matches.
The host, Henry, was entertaining a group of young heirs from the city’s most prominent families.
Bam!
Suddenly, a loud crash echoed from the entrance. Then, two doormen landed heavily in the hall.
“Who is it?”
One of Henry’s lackeys bellowed.
Moments later, a young man strolled in with a small entourage of his own.
It was Elijah who had freshly arrived in Grayvale.
“Who do you think you are? Do you have any idea where you are?!” someone shouted angrily.
“I’ve heard this is where Grayvale’s brightest martial prodigies gather. I thought I’d drop by and see if the rumors were true.” Elijah smiled faintly.
“You arrogant fool! Let me teach you a lesson!”
Immediately, one of the young martial artists charged at Elijah.
Elijah’s expression was filled with disdain. With a single punch, the air seemed to crackle, and his opponent was sent flying. Blood poured from the man’s mouth and nose as he crumpled to the floor. He was barely alive.
The room erupted into chaos.
“That was unnecessarily brutal!” Henry’s face was dark with anger.
“Don’t like it? Feel free to step up,” Elijah said tauntingly.
“I’ll take you on!” Henry launched into an attack and employed his family’s signature martial arts technique to target Elijah’s lower body.
But Elijah simply sneered. With a single kick, his powerful pure energy surged like a tidal wave.
Henry’s face twisted in shock.
But he was too slow to dodge. Elijah’s kick struck him squarely in the chest.
He was sent sprawling, and his ribs shattered. He could not rise with such severe injuries.
The room was filled with shock and disbelief.
“What’s the matter? Is this the best of Grayvale’s so-called prodigies?” Elijah asked mockingly.
The crowd seethed with anger, but none dared to step forward.
“I’ll fight you!”
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The readers' comments on the novel: My Aloof Sisters Asked for My Forgiveness
Nice one...
Shitty ending but considering overall I give the book .05 out of 5 stars. You used the same plot to many times, too many translation errors, even at the end you screwed around with the font and color because who knows why, the title had nothing to do with the story do I need to continue...
Just move to the enemy and let the snipers kill him for you Dustin. Use him as your shield easy peasy Mac n cheesey....
Tell hell hall said get his ass out here now or I will kill everyone here you have 10 seconds to do what I said. 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,0 to late...
Why does Dustin still think he owes his adoptive dad a debt? Sure he saved his life and help raise, taught martial arts etc... till his death but Dustin stayed on and put his life at risk and invested his time and money into his 5 daughters up until they came across their biological brother and kicked him out. Treat him like a thieving dog and have attempted numerous times to kill him. He finally showed some common sense by imprisoning the 1 sister and killing her cousin yet he lets the others slide. With his status and power I would have already killed them off or at the very least taken them and imprisoned them like the 1 and tortured the mom into spilling everything she knows and getting my rightful inheritance, but the author has to drag it out....
He said to mutilate the body and burn it why not start with beheading it and taking it back to show the city and place it as an offering to his family? That's what a great MC would have done....
Lame you change the name of the characters and use the same ole trope how many time are you going to use it? First it was the Langley sisters, then the McCall girl I believe this is the second or third time with Shawna. You need new material author...
Oh my not the weak who the MC showed mercy by not killing him because of some honor bound duty to a dead guy makes a comeback and forces the MC into a corner before the mc finally kills him arc 🤣...
🤣 now this is better just because I took her virginity doesn't mean I'm responsible for her. Love it....
When will he introduce his one eye willy for them to pet, stroke and kiss?...