Third Person POV
Nan staggers backward, ignoring the sting on her cheek and the blood in her mouth. She watched as Chester landed blow after blow in Tyler’s face, making him barely recognizable. Nan’s wolf whimpered at the sight of their mate and his clear anger.
Wait…
Chester??
What was he doing here?!
Chester’s hands were red and blistered from the force he was using to destroy Tyler’s face. For a moment, Tyler did try and fight him, but Chester was much bigger and stronger. Nan was so frozen that she couldn’t comprehend what was happening.
It was Mac’s scream that brought Nan’s attention back to reality.
“Tyler!” Mac cried, rushing towards them, Kelsey hot on her trail with equal panic. “Let my cousin go, you animal!!”
Mac tried to get Chester off Tyler; Chester was the kind of guy who would never put a woman in danger, so the second Mac was near him, he paused his rampage on Tyler’s face.
“You’re going to kill him,” Mac cried. “Who the hell are you?”
Kelsey glared at Nan, her eyes almost deadly and accusatory.
“Do you know him? Why aren’t you saying anything.”
Nan’s eyes never left Chester; she was frozen and beyond confused. She was in a different country, so how was it possible that Chester just happened to show up here out of the blue?
Chester was breathing deep, his rage palpable.
“Get this fucker out of here before I kill him,” he said through his teeth, his eyes on Mac’s pale face.
She could feel that he had Alpha blood boiling through him, and she knew better than to argue with an Alpha, even if he wasn’t an Alpha to any pack directly.
Chester released his hold on Tyler, who was broken and whimpering, barely able to see out of his eyes.
“Are you just going to stand there?” Kelsey asked, her eyes remaining on Nan, who remained frozen. “Tyler is your boyfriend!”
Chester growled furiously at her, the ground shaking under the force, drawing Kelsey’s attention to him.
“I suggest you leave immediately,” he said through his teeth, trying desperately to real in his anger.
Kelsey shot Nan one last look before Mac grabbed her arm.
“Help me get my cousin out of here,” she pleaded.
Kelsey pressed her lips together.
She nodded and glanced at the ground.
“Tyler was dragging me out here to talk,” she murmured, embarrassed.
“Yeah, we are going to address that later,” Chester said, his tone low and deadly as Tyler was brought back up. “But for now, let's get you cleaned up.”
His eyes scanned her face, the blood on her lip, the bruise on her cheek and wrists. His eyes darkened at the sight.
She nibbled on her lower lip and nodded as she guided him away.
After walking through the resort and suffering an awkward ride in the elevator, they finally reached the suite.
Chester put his suitcase down; it wasn’t a big bag, but big enough to indicate that he wasn’t planning on leaving any time soon.
“This is a strange suite,” he pointed out.
Nan nodded.
“Yeah, it’s like a studio apartment,” she said, glancing at their beds. There’s a kitchen, a living room area, and a large bathroom.
“Is it cool if I crash on the couch?” He asked.

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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...