Judy’s POV
I hate sitting here like a waiting duck; it was only Tabby and me while everyone else went to search for more flags. Tabby was staring out at the ocean, watching the waves jolting the canoes we needed to take to get off this island. There were three in total for our team, just enough to get back to base.
We’ve been sitting here for a few hours; the sun beaming down on us, making our jobs incredibly hot and difficult. I felt the sun burning into my flesh and I knew I’d have sunburn by the time I left this place. I hated having such fair skin.
Sighing, I lay back on the sand, staring up at the blue skies; there were some clouds in the sky, but not enough to provide us with some shade.
“When do you think we’ll get to go back?” Tabby asks, pulling her attention from the ocean to look at me.
I opened my mouth to answer, but the ruffling on a bush turned my attention to the wooded area. I quickly sat up; my eyes narrowed as I stared off into the forest. Tabby was also standing at attention, her eyes narrowed, and her breathing halted to almost nothing.
There was somebody here and they didn’t smell like a teammate.
Neither of us spoke, we stared and listened for any signs of movement. And then it happened again; this time, I was on my feet. My heartbeat was rapid with both worry and excitement. Perhaps this wasn’t a boring job after all; maybe Sherry was right, and the other teams would try to get our flags.
Soon, multiple different competitors were emerging from the forest, their eyes narrowed and determination crossing their faces as they stared at us. One of them, the largest one, looked around for a moment, and then a smirk spread across his lips when he spotted us.
“They left two of the smallest girls on their team to watch over their flags?” He laughed, making the other’s chuckle as well. One of the guys who I had fought with before had gone completely pale at the sight of me and I provided him with a “not so innocent” smirk.
He opened his mouth to say something to the others, but then he clamped his lips shut. He ended up disappearing without any of his teammates noticing. He was smart to leave because he knew exactly what I was capable of.
The others though, not so much.
They had only seen me passing; too consumed with their own fights to notice me. I never got the chance to combat with them. Which was fine because they were about to learn today.
“Hey, where’d Marco go?” One of the guys asked with a frown, noticing the guy who recognized me had left.
They looked around, equally perplexed, but not enough to go look for him. He left his teammates to suffer; though we worked in teams, we were also covering our own asses, so I really couldn’t blame him.
“Maybe he went to search the perimeter,” the girl said, shrugging. “We don’t need him for this anyways, so it’s fine.”
They all chuckled.
“Yeah, this will be quick,” the first guy said, stepping towards me, his eyes flashing dangerously as he glared at me. “Should have surrendered when you had the chance.”
The others only watched as he lunged at me, attempting to grab me, but I was way faster and before he could reach me, I was already behind him. He frowned, not even seeing me move. When he whipped around to look at me, it was too late, I had him on the ground in only a second. It was easier because he wasn’t expecting it, so it wasn’t much of a fight. But once he got his head out of his ass and realized that I was actually fighting him and had the upper hand, his mind went into survival mode, and he immediately started to fight back.

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This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...