“Did you turn them down?” I asked him.
His eyes flashed with something I couldn’t quite read.
“Of course I did,” he replied. “Did you think I was going ot pick up women while here?”
I shrugged.
“I wouldn’t put it past you,” I admit.
“I’m not that big of an asshole,” he murmured, looking almost offended.
“Debatable,” I teased.
“Where’s Irene?” Sammy asked, glancing around the space.
“Bathroom,” Nan replied, still avoiding Chester’s gaze.
I frowned as I too looked around.
“She’s been in there for a while,” I said, noticing the time. “Maybe she can’t find us. I’ll go look for her.”
I stand and Chester stands as well.
“I’ll come with you,” he said a little too quickly.
I knew he just needed some space from Nan, and this was his way of getting that. I nodded and motioned for him to follow me.
We weaved our way through the crowds of people and towards the secluded hallway that led to the bathroom. As we neared the hallway, my senses started to pick up on something and my heart began to race. Something was wrong… I could feel it deep in my bones and Chester could sense my growing anxiety.
“What is it?” He asked with a frown.
“Something wrong,” I said, quickening my pace.
“How can you tell?”
“I can do this all day,” I said through my teeth. “Come at me!”
“Who the hell are you?” He asked, wincing in pain as he struggled to get to his feet.
“I’m someone you seriously shouldn’t fuck with,” I growled.
Before I could say anything more, gamma warriors were in the room, pinning him to the ground.
One of the gammas knelt beside Irene and gave her his overcoat to cover her body. She thanked him as she wiped away her tears, her body still trembling. I wondered where the gammas were until this point and why they weren’t watching their main target. I decided to not question them right now though.
I grabbed Irene’s hand and pulled her to her feet.
“Let’s go,” I told her firmly, pulling her out of the bathroom like I was some kind of mother figure.

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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...