Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 433
Judy’s POV
“I can’t believe we are actually at the fair right now,” I breathed as I stared around at all the rides and the colors. The crowd was insane because the fair was only in town for a couple more days, so everybody was having fun now.
“Does this make you happy?” He asked, observing me.
I nodded.
“Yes,” I admitted. “I’ve been wanting to come here with my friends, but we haven’t had any time to sneak away between work and school.”
He was quiet for a moment, processing my words.
“Are you okay with me being here with you instead of them?” He asked, glancing at me.
My heart swelled at his question.
I nodded slowly.
“Yes,” I told him. “I’m actually glad you are here with me. I have a feeling you never really had fun before. You are all work and Lycan duties. Do you ever have the chance to get out and have fun?”
He narrowed his eyes at me.
“I have fun,” he murmured, almost defensively.
I fought a laugh as I looked up at him.
“Oh yeah? Name one thing that you’ve done that you consider fun,” I said, raising my brows at him.
He thought about it for a moment.
“I went to a banquet a few weeks ago that I found enjoyable,” he replied.
I laughed.
“That’s not the kind of fun I’m talking about,” I told him, rolling my eyes. “I meant, going on rides and eating greasy foods… playing games.”
“Games?”
I nodded and pointed at the game stands that were set up.
“Yes and attempting to win prizes but never quite getting here because they are rigged.”
“Rigged?” He asked, glancing at me. “Is that legal?”
“I don’t know, but everyone knows the games at fairs are all rigged,” I tell him with a shrug. “It’s part of the fun.”
“How is that fun?”
“Congratulations,” the guy said. “You can choose any prize you want.”
Gavin looked oddly victorious as he glanced at me.
“Choose your prize,” he told me, his tone gentle.
I flushed as I glanced up at the prize board. The giant purple bear caught my eye, so I pointed at that.
Gavin nodded at the guy.
“Wrap it up for us,” he said, as he took my hand and guided me away without a single look back at the man. The guy stared at him with a dumbstruck expression, probably confused about what had just happened.
“That was incredible,” I laughed. “Did you see the look on his face?”
Gavin chuckled; it was nice to see him a bit carefree for once.
“Yeah, I thought he was going to pass out,” he admitted. “So, what other things do you do at the fair?”
“Ride rides obviously,” I said, glancing at the rollercoaster in the distance. “Like that one.”
He followed my gaze and I swear I saw his face paling.
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This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...