Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 528
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Rachel stared at herself in the mirror; she perfectly covered the hickeys that covered her neck and sprayed the room she booked with a scented spray, hiding the scent of sex that was clearly evident.
She hoped she didn’t look too disheveled when she went back downstairs to meet Gavin at the bar.
She finished getting the room situated, slipped her shoes on, and started towards the door, but froze when she heard a commotion in the hallway. Frowning, she turned the handle and pushed the door open, only to see a couple of men dragging a very drunken and drugged-up Gavin towards a large set of doors at the end of the hallway. She was about to say something to them when she saw Judy trailing after them, worrying her bottom lip and tugging at her fingers. Judy hadn’t noticed her, but the rage Rachel felt was like no other.
What the hell was she even doing here??
She hid away for a moment as Judy and the others took Gavin through the large set of doors. After a minute of waiting, with bated breath, the men emerged without Judy or Gavin in sight.
“I shouldn’t be surprised a man like that owns his own suite here,” one of them murmured as they passed Rachel. “He looks rich as fuck.”
“Pretentious asshole who can’t hold his own liquor,” the other murmured.
They both laughed as they made their way to the elevator.
Rachel gawked after them and then stared at the large doors.
Was it true that Gavin owned his own suite here?
Rachel’s cheeks flushed with anger. Why the fuck was Judy in his personal suite and she wasn’t? This wasn’t right! It was supposed to be Rachel. Rachel is the one who came back for him… she’s the one he loved and was going to marry a long time ago.
“I’ve got you,” Rachel purred, holding onto Gavin even tighter.
She told Judy she would call the doctor once she left, but that was the furthest thing from her mind. What she wanted was to get Gavin into bed and undressed as soon as possible.
She wasn’t a complete monster; she wasn’t planning on taking advantage of him fully… but she wanted to make it appear as if something had happened between them, further sealing their growing bond.
Plus, the thought of actually being intimate with Gavin made her stomach recoil. He was the enemy after all.
Once Judy left, a wicked smile spread across Rache’s face.
Gavin was breathing heavily from whatever interaction he had with her. His eyes had opened briefly, and when he saw Rachel’s face, his brows furrowed, and he whispered her name. He was too far gone to fight the drugs, though, so Rachel used that as her opportunity to put on a little show for Judy to ensure she left.
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This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...