Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 565
“I need to see Rachel Barron,” I found myself saying to the front desk nurse.
She typed something on her computer and then glanced up at me.
“She’s in room 303. You can use the elevator and go to the right.”
I nodded my thanks, no longer trusting my voice. I wasn’t sure if it was a good idea for me to do this alone; I didn’t tell Nan that I was coming here, and I certainly didn’t tell Irene.
I stepped into the elevator and waited with bated breath for the doors to open back up. Once I was on the upper level, I stayed to the right, just as instructed, and found door 303. Through the small window, I saw that Rachel was awake. She was scrolling through her phone with a small smile on her face.
Taking a deep breath, I stepped into the room, shutting the door behind me. Rachel looked up, and her eyes widened when she saw me standing in the entrance.
“Judy?” She asked.
“Hi…” I said, my voice coming out breathless.
She placed her phone on the bedside table, her eyes never leaving mine.
“Gotta say, I’m surprised you’re here. If you’re looking for Gavin—”
“I’m actually here to speak to you,” I told her quickly.
“I see,” she said, raising her brows.
She glanced at the chair at her bedside.
“Please,” she said. “Have a seat.”
With a shaky breath, I stepped closer towards her bed and took a seat, my legs barely allowing me to walk as I did so.
Rachel plastered a smile, though I could tell it wasn’t genuine.
“What honor do I have for this little visit?”
“The news article…” I began, my voice coming out barely above a whisper. “Is it true?”
Rachel’s grin grew wider when she saw my face. I couldn’t speak; I couldn’t even move. I needed to leave. I turned away from her before she could see the tears burning in my eyes.
“Congratulations,” I managed to whisper before I ran from the room.
By the time I was outside, I was clutching my phone to my ear like it was my lifeline. I didn’t trust my voice, so I prayed to the Moon Goddess that it didn’t break while I spoke.
I waited with bated breath as the phone rang, praying that the other person would answer.
“Hello?” Said a male voice on the other end.
I was quiet for a moment, my heart racing in my chest. I had no idea what I was going to say; I had no idea how to approach this.
“Miss Montague?” He asked, having my number in his phone so he could see it was me calling.
“Hey,” I managed to croak before clearing my throat and trying again. “I want to take you up on your Alpha's offer, Beta Ron. How soon can you get me out of here?”
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This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...