Third Person POV
Selene smoothed out the silky fabrics of her black dress as she looked in the mirror. She stood in her walk-in closet, the one that Zachary had built for her years ago. Her dark and thick hair was draped over my shoulder; she had just finished brushing it out. It’s been a little over an hour since Judy and Gavin left, and she couldn’t get Gavin’s words out of her mind.
She thought about her day with Judy Montague; she was a strange girl, but Selene couldn’t deny the feelings she had around Judy. It was almost like she had known Judy her entire life.
There was a knock on the door, drawing Selene’s attention from her mirror to the doorway.
“Yes?” She called out, glad that her voice didn’t waver.
The door creaked open, and her loving husband and mate poked his head in, a concerned look in his eyes.
“You’ve been quiet. I was getting worried,” Zachary said, stepping into the walk-in closet. “Everything okay?”
Selene gave him a faint smile.
“How was your meeting with Mr. Landry?” Selene asked, deflecting the question.
Zachary frowned, but he went along with the change in subject.
“It was good,” he replied. “I think I was finally getting through to him. We might be able to come out of this after all.”
Selene nodded, though her doubts weighed in.
“That’s good,” she breathed. “That’s really good. Maybe we won’t have to go back into hiding after all.”
“No, we won’t go back into hiding,” Zachary assured her, stepping closer. “Are you sure everything is okay?”
Selene swallowed, her eyes finding his. She knew she couldn’t hide anything from her mate, but she wasn’t sure what to say to him that wouldn’t worry him. So, she forced a smile she knew didn’t reach her eyes.
“I’m fine,” she lied. “Have you seen Lila around?”
He frowned, but then he lifted his shoulders in a shrug.
“I’m not sure,” he admitted. “I think I heard her with a friend earlier. But I’m not sure where they had gone.”
Selene nodded.
Daisy had helped get the Moon Gem back from Lila, but she had no idea that Daisy was still in contact with her daughter. She wasn’t sure why, but she had a nasty feeling in the pit of her stomach.



Without knocking, she grabbed the door handle of Lila’s bedroom door and pushed it open, welcoming herself inside.
Lila nearly shrieked at the intrusion, whipping around from her dresser, eyes wild and hair a mess.
“Mom?” Lila gasped, her eyes wide with alarm. “What on earth are you doing?”
“Who were you just with?”
Lila’s eyes grew even wider if that was possible.

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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...