Third Person POV
“I don’t understand why you are so nervous… It’s not like this is your first child,” Cora teased her older brother, Zachary, who was pacing back and forth outside of Selene’s hospital room. He didn’t want to disturb his wife while she slept.
Sleep hadn’t come easily to Selene; this had been a rather difficult pregnancy, and Selene’s body had taken a serious toll. The doctors finally gave her something that allowed her a bit of comfort, and she was able to get some much-needed sleep. Zachary and Cora decided to step out of the room to give her some space, and Zachary hadn’t stopped pacing since.
His wolf didn’t like the idea of being away from Selene, having her out of his sight, even for a second. He was trying hard to contain his wolf’s growing agitation, and Cora’s teasing wasn’t helping.
Zachary and Cora always had a good relationship; they really only had each other since their parents’ untimely death when they were young.
“You said it yourself, this child is the most powerful witch to exist,” he muttered. “Plus, this is my first daughter. I’m not sure I know how to raise a daughter.”
Cora gave her brother a comforting smile.
“It’s not like you’re going to do this on your own,” she said, putting a hand on her brother’s shoulder. “You have me in your corner, not to mention Selene.”
“If she survives giving birth to this baby,” Zachary said grimly, his wolf not liking those words coming out of his mouth, growling immediately. “She’s weak… weaker than I had ever seen her, and she’s in so much pain.”
“That’s why I’m here and I’m not leaving,” Cora assured him. “I’ll make sure she survives giving birth to this baby, and I’ll make sure that this baby’s magic doesn’t take over her small body.”
“How do you suppose you do that?” Zachary asked, narrowing his eyes.
“I read somewhere about magic transfer. Magic can be transferred to family heirlooms and kept safe until the intended owner of said magic spills their blood onto the heirloom… only then will the magic be restored.”
His eyes snapped to hers, and they widened.
“Why would you hide it from me?”




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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
This story is all over the place. i'm trying my best to keep going because he would be so good The writer and editor communicated at least a little. (Yes I understand its 1 maybe 2 people writing and tending to the story) However, everyone needs to be on the same page. The characters names continue to change: Rachel at first then her name changed to Rebecca, Ethans sister name is now jenna. some times they talk in 3rd person which I'm sure is a accident when its in that characters POV. How did we do a time jump 5 years making Matt 13 with Judy's son being 5 years old but when we get to the Blackwell story line he's nine again and she's still pregnant using her time with matt to gain experience with her son. What happened to the time jump....
Is it just me, or do they add chapters daily for one week then leave you in suspense for a week before they start posting again? The book is amazing, but it's frustrating being in such high excitement and thrill then being left with your mind boggling....
Thank you for continuing to write this story! Trying to be grateful for the recent 2 small chapters a day, however due to enjoying it so much, wish they were more and longer....
Could the author please get the names correct…CHESTER is Nan’s mate —NOT Chuck. I don’t know who is writing these chapters, but I do not think it is the original author. Considering the original author has quite a few ongoing stories, she must have handed this one off to someone else. Very disappointing!...
Has the author forgot her own story? Didn't lila/Racheal date gavin when he first got Mathew? Meaning that she's the same or similar age as gavin! Now it's changed that she's born on the same day as Judy......
This book has gone off the rails. First there was a Five Years Later chapter where everyone had kids and Irene was marked and pregnant by Chuck and now they're not mated and Chuck is a slime ball. Make it make sense....
I don't understand thus story. Didn't she just win 5 million in the gamma games? Why is she living with people and not in her own place?...
No updates/new chapters since 10/14/2025???? This is so frustrating for those of us who have followed this book/author from the beginning! So disappointing!...
Why no updates posted since 9/20/25????...
Well that.....sucked. That can't seriously be the ending? Tf?...