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The word "status" struck Finnian like a blow to the chest. As composed as he usually was, he couldn’t help but let his face darken.
It was true—while the baby Amara was carrying was his, he held no official place in her life, and Amara had no intention of letting him acknowledge the child.
Still, no matter how unhappy he felt, he couldn’t let it show in front of Keith. That would just make him look vulnerable.
Just as he was about to say something, Amara rose to her feet. “Enough. Let’s go—I really don’t want to stay at the hospital any longer.”
She was genuinely glad that Keith had come to check on her, but she knew that, whenever he and Finnian met, they were bound to butt heads. Amara found it exhausting.
Hearing Amara speak up, Finnian said nothing more. Instead, he offered, “Let me take you home. You should go see Grandpa—he’s been asking about you.”
Amara had already received a message from Mr. Kevin Everly that morning, and she did want to see her grandfather. She nodded.
She turned to Keith and said, “I’m okay now, really. The pain is gone, so you don’t have to worry. I’ll go see Grandpa first—you should head back.”
Keith was obviously uneasy seeing Amara leave with Finnian—or maybe he just couldn’t stand the thought of her going with Finnian at all.
Now that the truth about Amara’s pregnancy was out, it only made Finnian’s role as her caretaker seem even more legitimate, which made Keith uncomfortable.
But there was nothing he could do to stop her. So he simply said, “Alright. Call me if you need anything.”
Amara agreed, and left with Finnian.
Before long, they arrived at the Everly Estate. As Amara stepped through the door into the living room, she glanced around, a wave of mixed emotions washing over her.


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