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Without makeup, Liliana had an air of innocence about her. Her eyes were still puffy from crying the night before, lending her a fragile, vulnerable look—but she was by no means unattractive.
She checked herself in the mirror and, satisfied with her appearance, called a cab to the Everly Group headquarters. Once inside the building, she approached the front desk and said she wanted to see Finnian.
In the past, she never needed to announce herself—she could go straight up to Finnian’s office without any trouble. Now, things had clearly changed. Even just being asked to wait for approval before seeing him made her uneasy.
She suspected Finnian wouldn’t agree to meet her. Sure enough, the receptionist told her, “Mr. Everly isn’t available to see you. Please leave the premises.”
Liliana clutched the strap of her purse tightly, anxiety rising as she stood rooted in place.
Just then, Will returned from running an errand. Spotting her, he said, “Ms. Porter, are you here to see Mr. Everly? He’s made it clear that he won’t be seeing you again. You should head home.”
Liliana lifted the box of pastries she’d brought, forcing a smile. “I just came to bring Finn some pastries I made. That’s all.”
“Even if we’re not getting married, we’re still friends, aren’t we? Could you please just tell Finn I’d like to go up and say hello? Just for a moment.”
Will’s expression was unyielding. “Mr. Everly said that no matter what the reason, he won’t see you again, Ms. Porter. There’s no point in insisting. Please leave.”
Liliana’s face drained of color. Was Finnian really this resolute? Would he truly refuse to see her, no matter what happened in the future?
She bit her lip, and suddenly her body swayed. With a soft thud, she collapsed onto the floor.


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