Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 228
Chapter 0228
Judy’s POV
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I took another sip of my wine, feeling it relax my mind and body. I kept glancing at my phone periodically, thinking there would be a missed call or anew message. But there wasn’t. I hated the jab of disappointment I would feel in my chest every time I saw that there was no message. I shouldn’t be feeling this way. Gavin was with his family… It’s not like he was losing interest in me or anything Besides, even if he was, it shouldn’t matter that much. We are only having some fun…. scratching each other’s itches and putting on a show to get some people off our backs.
Yet, my chest tightened every time I glanced at my phone. I took a deep breath and put my phone on the table, unable to look at it any further. I glanced at Nan’s lightly sipped wine and frowned when I glanced over my shoulder at the entryway to the kitchen.
I wondered where she was. I knew she was going to find out what Chester was cooking, but she had been gone for some time now. I figured I should go check on her. I hoped she didn’t get lost on the way to the kitchen. I took another sip of the wine before placing it on the table and standing to my feet. I brushed my pants, straightening them with the palms of my hands before I started towards the kitchen.
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The door of the kitchen was propped open slightly and I could see the back of Nan’s figure standing in the entryway. I smiled as I made my way towards her, but slowly started to subside when I saw how tense she was. Her entire body was like a stiff board.
Frowning, I walked towards her.
“Nan, are you okay?” I asked. I paused when I reached her, and I could see over her shoulder that she was staring at Chester and Harper.
Harper was seated on the kitchen counter, her legs wrapped around Chester’s waist and her arms around his neck. Chester’s arms were loosely draped around Harper’s thin waist, and she was pressing herself firmly against his body. Her tongue was practically down his throat; it was strange because he seemed a bit detached from the kiss, but she was going in hard. I wasn’t surprised to see them like this; if I were to be honest, it wasn’t the first time I had walked in on them. Though, it was the first time that it’s ever happened out in the open before… it wasn’t like them to lose control like this in the kitchen.
Harper was very professional and kept her personal life a secret. They were alone right now so I’m assuming Chester sent the rest of his staff away, however anyone could still walk right in on them.. including Nan who was frozen in her spot.
She was probably not expecting to see the chef wrapped up in the arms of the maid. I bit my lower lip, trying to keep myself from laughing out loud as I placed a hand on her shoulder, trying to draw her attention back to me.
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Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...