Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 229
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“Nan…” I whispered. “What is it?”
as she
“I’m so sorry…” she said hoarsely pulled her eyes away from me to look at the ground. “But I can’t stay here…”
“Wait what?” I asked, my brows raising, “Why not? What’s wrong? Please, talk to me…”
She shook her head; she was trying hard to keep the tears from spilling out of her eyes.
“I have to go….” she whispered.
Before I could say another word, she was running past me and towards the front door.
“Nan!” I called after her, but it was no use, the front door was slamming shut and Nan was running out of the mansion. I stood, confused.
I looked back at Chester who released a shaky breath of his own; he blinked a few times as if he had now just realized where he was. He looked at me and then at Harper who was staring at him questionably. She raised her brows and folded her arms across her chest as she slid off the counter.
“What was that all about?” She asked him.
He didn’t answer her, but instead, he looked at me.
“Who was that?” He asked me, taking me by surprise.
“What?” I asked him. “Why?”
“Just answer the question,” he said again, more firmly and making me take a step back. His eyes had gone wild, and my heart was beating fast against my ribcage. Something was wrong and I was determined to figure out what the hell it was.
“My best friend,” I answered, narrowing my eyes at him. “Nan Rugby.
His expression softened for a moment.
“Nan…” he whispered as if he was tasting the name on his tongue, and from the look on his face, I would
The front door swung open and then slammed shut; I didn’t need to turn to see who it was that had followed us outside. I looked over my shoulder at a very pissed of Harper who was glaring at Chester as if he had just slapped her. She had her arms wrapped around her body and her lips were pressed in a thin line.
“What the fuck, Chester. Who was that woman?” She asked, her brows furrowed as she glared at him. “ How could you chase after her and leave me alone like that?”
“I’m sorry, Harper,” he murmured. “But it was a mistake to make out with you like that in the kitchen. It shouldn’t have happened. You were right when you said we shouldn’t be having a relationship while we work together.”
His words took me by surprise; Chester wasn’t usually the logical one. He was a flirt and never cared about such a thing before. It seemed to have taken Harper by surprise too because her mouth fell open.
“W…what are you saying, Chester?” She asked, I could hear the hurt in her voice as she fought to keep her emotions in check.
He sighed and ran his fingers through his blond shaggy hair before he turned ot face her. His eyes were so serious, and it made Harper’s eyes grow wide as she took a step away from him.
“I’m saying that we can’t see each other anymore,” he told her firmly. “I’m sorry… but whatever this is …” he said, motioning between the two of them. “It’s over.”
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Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...