Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 230
Chapter 0230
Judy’s POV
“A…are you serious right now??” Harper asked, taken aback by Chester’s words.
He nodded and sighed.
“Yes, Harper. I’m sorry,” he murmured, and then he walked past her and back inside. Harper stood frozen, her face red with anger and hurt all at the same time. My heart hurt for her; I knew how much she liked Chester. I could see it on her face every time that he was around. I knew how much it hurt for the guy you liked to not want you back… or to give you up so easily. But I couldn’t help but wonder if Nan was okay.
“I’m sorry…” I told Harper, not sur what more to say.
“I just don’t get it…” she whispered, staring down at her feet. “Everything was fine. Then that girl walked in and…” her voice trailed off.
you
her?”
think they are seeing each other? I know Chester went on a date the other day. Could that be
I shook my head; Nan would have told me if she went on a date with a man. She would have told me all about it. The fact that she hadn’t mentioned it makes me wonder what this story was.
“I’m not too sure, Harper,” I settled on saying.
Harper nodded and sniffed back her tears before she turned her back towards me.
“I’m just going to go inside. If you need anything… I’ll be in my room,” she murmured.
Without another word, she walked into the mansion. I stared after her for a brief while before I sighed and grabbed my phone out of my pocket. I glanced at the screen, seeing that I had no. Missed calls or texts. Now I was doubt disappointed; I was upset that Gavin hadn’t reached out to me, but I was also upset that Nan hadn’t texted me after she left to tell me that she was okay.
I brought up her contact and pressed the phone to my cheek. It rang several times before I got her
voicemail.
I spit the water and toothpaste out of my mouth and rinsed the brush off before placing it in its holder. I grabbed a hand towel and wiped off my lips before putting it back on the rack. I sighed and leaned against the counter, feeling a wave of dizziness.
This whole thing was getting to my head and I just wanted to get some sleep. After several deep breaths, I turned away, turned off the bathroom light, and stepped into my room. It was lonely without Gavin. I had started to get used to him spending his nights here even if it was out of the ordinary at first.
I checked my phone one last time and saw no missed texts or calls. I sighed and tried calling Nan again, but I got her voicemail… again. I put my phone on the charger, placing it on my nightstand before I crawled into bed. I hated being alone right now… I wished I could reach out to Gavin, but I knew he was busy. I wished I could get a hold of Nan… but she refused to answer my calls.
I had no idea what was going on, but I hoped that I could figure it out in the morning.
It took a while, but eventually, I was able to drift off to sleep.
When I woke the next morning, I felt restless and a bitnumb. I grabbed my phone to see if I had a missed call and my heart skipped a beat when I saw a text message from Gavin. It was sent early this morning. I bit my lower lip as I opened the message.
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Anyone have suggestions for other books like this that are captivating for me to read while I wait for more chapters etc?...
Despite everyone's frustrations with this book, I think it's quite entertaining. I think Gavin and Judy have a long road ahead of them. If/when they're able to finally get on the same page, they still have to deal with his mom. Not to mention Judy has to reconcile with Matthew after abandoning him when she promised she wouldn't; and face Irene with the news that she's carrying a new sibling. Lol, Levi is the least of their concerns. Then there's having the baby. Pretty sure Gavin has untreated trauma associated with Irene's birth. My thoughts are, just be patient, find other books to read in between and enjoy the ride. I think it'll be good....
Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....