Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 254
Chapter 0254
Judy’s POV
“You want me to go with you??” Nan asked, her eyes wide
I nodded.
“Yes,” I told her. “We would only be gone for a few weeks. And I think it would do us both some good to get away for a bit.”
“Are you sure?” She asked, worry and fear in her eyes. “I don’t want to impose.”
I
“You could never impose, Nan,” I assured her. “Plus, I dont want to go alone.”
A grin spread across her lips.
“I do have a ton of PTO I haven’t used,” she told me.
“And it’s during school vacation so you won’t be missing anything,” I told her, nudging her gently. “Come on, Nan. Say yes.”
She laughed and then nodded.
“Okay, yes!”
For the remainder of the night, we talked about everything we had missed these last few days. It was nice to have my best friend back, and the more we talked and planned for our getaway, the more excited we both became.
I read to her the email that I received about the place where the competition is being held. It’s a tropical location and it looked so nice. We were staying at a nice resort, completely paid for by the sponsors of the event. The only thing Nan needed to do was get a plane ticket and a new bathing suit
Thankfully, the seat right next to me was available and she was able to book the seat without any issues before the night ended.
Chester hadn’t bothered us for the rest of the night, and I couldn’t help but wonder if he was okay. I went to check on him at some point during the night while Nan slept, but he wasn’t in the kitchen and one of the night warriors mentioned seeing him leaving not too long after we returned.
I figured he needed some space, so I left him alone for the night.
Nan ended up leaving early in the morning so she could get home and shower before her late morning classes. I walked down the stairs and into the kitchen only to find Chester and Harper in a heated
argument.
“How could you choose her over me?” Harper asked through her teeth. “After all we’ve been through together? I’ve waited for you for long enough…”
“I never asked you to wait for me,” Chester said, shaking his head. “I thought you wanted to keep our relationship, and our work separate. Why are you bothering me in the kitchen?”
“Because you won’t talk to me otherwise,” Harper cried. “I’s not fair, Chester!”
“You aren’t acting fair, Harper,” Chester said, turning to face her. “I found my mate. You were once my friend, Harps. You should be happy for me.”
“I’m in love with you,” Haper said, folding her arms across her chest. “I thought you were feeling something for me too. But I guess I was wrong.”
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“Look, I enjoyed hooking up. But it can’t happen again. Not while I’m trying to figure out what to do about my
He looked as if he wanted to argue, but he pressed his mouth in a thin line and nodded. Deep down, he knew it was for the best.
I had never seen him look so serious before.
It made me chuckle.
I didn’t have any classes today, so I went to the Landry Villa a bit early. I was hoping to be able to speak with Gavin and tell him that I was leaving for the Gamma competition in a week.
A part of me hoped he’d want to go with me as well, but there was another part of me that knew that he wouldn’t.
“Is Gavin here?” I asked the butler, Adam.
He shook his head.
“He hadn’t been here all night,” he told me. “I think he spent another night at the office.‘
My heart fell into my stomach. Why was he avoiding coming home? Was it because of me?
“Oh, I was going to tell him that I’m going to be gone for a few weeks. I’m leaving next week for the gamma competition,” I told him.
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Anyone Know where we Can Read all of this book 2 chapters a day is a joke And waiting is killing me I’ll just want to end this book !!...
I never really read these books, but came across this one and annoyingly got hooked. Do these books just go on forever with no resolution? As if so, I’m going to call it a day and write my own ending lol...
Lovely… I just found this book Friday and I’ve finished all that here. How often do they release more and how much at a time?! I’m invested....
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...