Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 255
Chapter 0255
Adam narrowed his eyes.
“It’s kind of short notice, don’t you think?” He asked, raising his brows.
1 folded my arms across my chest.
“I didn’t really have a lot of notice,” I told him. “But this kind of a big deal. I can’t pass up the opportunity.”
After a brief pause, Adam nodded.
“I’ll let the Alpha know,” Adam said. “He’s finally allowing me to speak again. Next week is school vacation so it’s not like Master Matthew needs a tutor during those weeks.”
1 nodded and thanked him before going to search for Matt, However, I was stopped by Irene who hurried down the steps. Her eyes were wet, and I knew she had been crying. She froze when she saw me, and she wiped her eyes with the back of her hand.
“Oh, Judy…” she breathed. “You are early.“‘
“I didn’t have much going on today,” I admitted. “I figured I’d come early and get a head start.”
Things were strained between us no doubt; I knew she no longer thought of me as a friend, and truth be told, after these last few weeks, I no longer thought of her as one either. But something in my stomach twisted when I saw the pained look in her eyes and her pale features. She was letting herself go; it was clear from her weight loss that she hadn’t been eating and she’d been crying a lot.
I sighed, relenting.
“Is everything okay, Irene?” I asked her, hating that I still cared so much.
She was quiet for a moment, shuffling in her feet before she lifted her gaze to meet mine.
“Can I ask you something?” She asked me.
I nibbled my lower lip nervously as I nodded.
“Of course,” I replied.
“What happened with you and Ethan?”
I was surprised by her question and my brows raised.
“What?” I asked her.
“What happened?” She asked again. “Why did you break up? Tell me the truth, Judy.”
I thought about lying to her, knowing the truth would confuse and maybe even hurt her. But the reason why Irene hated me so much was because I lied to her in the first place, and I didn’t want to pile on more lies.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...