Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 264
Chapter 0264
Third Person POV
“So, I get information about Alpha Gavin’s business?” Ethan asked. He was seated at a table in the middle of a restaurant a few packs away from his own. Others he had never met sat at the table as well. Each of them with their own tasks. They all wore business clothes and looked Important; Ethan fit right in with them.
Levi Churchill sat at the front end of the table; the one in charge of the operation.
“What exactly am I looking for?” Ethan asked, staring around at the table.
Anything and everything is important,” Levi answered. “I want to take down his business, I need to know how it operates from the inside. You are already on the inside since you are engaged to be married to his daughter. You have access to his home. Find me personal information… anything… it’s all useful.”
Ethan nodded.
“Yes, Alpha,” he said, bowing his head as he felt the Lycan’s powers washing over him.
“And what about the girl?” One of the ladies at the table, Ethan couldn’t quite remember her name, asked. “You mentioned she was going to the Gamma competition?”
Ethan knew she was asking about Judy. Judy was open conversation for a bit and it was made clear to Alpha Levi that Judy had been involved with Gavin.
“I already have someone keeping an eye on her there,” Levi replied. “Plus, I’ll be heading there in the morning as well. Gavin will also be there, so this gives Ethan a prime opportunity to get all the information he can for the next few weeks. Can I count on you to do that?”
He narrowed his eyes at Ethan as he said that last part.
“Yes, Alpha,” Ethan repeated his earlier statement
Levi nodded and then stared at the rest of them.
“You know what to do,” he murmured. “You are dismissed”
With that, everyone packed up their things and took off in the vehicles they came in. Ethan ran his fingers through his hair and started to leave, but he was stopped by Alpha Levi.
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The readers' comments on the novel: Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law
So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...