Seducing My Ex’s Father In Law novel Chapter 265
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He had been faithful to Irene for weeks, but from the look on her face, he knew that she was suspecting something. It had to have been Scarlett who showed up at his house unannounced. No others would have done that; no others knew where he lived. It was only her.
“Did she say something to you?” Ethan asked, his voice feeling heavy as he spoke.
She shook her head and tucked a long strand of blonde hair behind her ear.
“No, but she looked upset. Like she’s been crying,” she replied.
Ethan let out a breath, hoping that Irene didn’t see the relief in his eyes. As long as Scarlett hadn’t said anything to her, then he could fix this.
“Maybe it was the wrong house, I wasn’t expecting anyone yesterday,” he told her, his confidence coming back.
She stared at him for a moment, her eyes narrowed, and he lips pressed in a thin line.
“Are you sure about that?” She asked. “Because she had a striking resemblance to Judy.”
Ethan froze as he looked at Irene; what had she figured out?
“What are you saying?” Ethan asked defensively.
“I’m saying it’s not a coincidence…”
“Judy has a very basic look,” he murmured, shaking his head. “I can pick out about 5 girls that look just like her. She’s not that special.”
“Why was she at your house, Ethan? Please, tell me the truth,” Irene said, stepping closer to him. He saw tears filling her eyes and for a moment, he actually felt bad. Maybe he would have told her the truth under different circumstances, but now he knew that he couldn’t. He had too much on the line and he needed to play his part a good little spy that he was.
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“I don’t know,” he said, putting his hands on her shoulders, hoping to be soothing. “I’m sorry I haven’t been around lately. I’ve been so busy with pack business. I have barely been home these last few weeks. If anyone were to stop by my house, then I wouldn’t have known. You know my family is pretty much running the pack until a new Alpha is appointed. We are the Beta family. She could have been trying to ask for a favor. Other than that, I don’t know why she would come over. I didn’t ask anyone to stop by.”
Irene stared at him for a long while like she was trying to figure out if he was telling the truth or not. She nibbled on her lower lip.
“I just have this nasty feeling…” shou
Ethan pressed his lips to her forehead.
tears dripping down her flushed cheeks.
“I promise, Irene. I’m not cheating on you. Nothing is going on. You know I love you. I wouldn’t have proposed to you if I didn’t,” he assured her.
After a moment, she nodded.
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So Spencer was “in love” before he even meet her? I used to wake up and read this book but now I let days go past before I read the chapters...
Well heres to the next 300 pages of this never ending story because now Gavin is going to have to save her before Spencer does something even more stupid because Judy is to weak to do anything for herself apparently....
3 chapters we didn't need. Already guessed Spencer was working with Levi and that the attacks were also Levi...
I think of all the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in at the island resort for the Gamma Competition, but then was suddemly 906 - which turned out to be needed information later. When they first met, Judy went to Gavin's office the next day and told him about her father's imprisonment and her need for money, but then later the author made it sound like Gavin had no idea. She won 5 million for takimg first in the competition but then it was eluded to her not have much money and needed cash from the additional tutoring job with Lukas and the position in Levi's elite force. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a bit pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the hundreds of unnecessary chapters. I believe if the author spent a little more time and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top pieces (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
I think of the things that bother me the most about the rushed writing is the inconsistencies. Judy and Nans room number was initially 606 when they checked in, but then was 906. Judy went to Gavin's office and told him about her father, but then later they made it sound like Gavin had no idea. Honestly, the wishy-washy writing makes it feel like Gavin is less of a strong leader and more like he has so much personal drama he cant keep anything straight. It feels like Judy is weaker than the author has intended, as well. I feel like Rachel's return could have been tightened up with more details around her time Gavin instead of making Judy out to be a little pathetic and desperate for just a sliver of Gavins attention. Her pregnancy was also disappointing because of the rushed plot, the author seemed to have forgotten that Judy gave her virginity to Gavin and no other sexual partners were introduced for her - so who the father of her baby was shouldn't have felt like such a surprise - it felt a bit insulting to her vibe and the character build throughout the chapter. I believe if the author spent a little more and cleaned up some of the events with pertinent and necessary details and remove the oddities of over-the-top information (like the shower gel and cologne that appeared out of nowhere for Gavin in Judy's condo) this storyline could really be something great and intriguing for readers....
You can tell this book was written by a man trying to think like a woman. There are so many plot holes and loose ends. They’re clearly dragging it on way more than they should as a money grab. And now we’re in for probably 50 more chapters while they hunt her down. I’m sure someone will end up drugged and SA’d by the end of it. So frustrating that we’re reading in circles. I’m out....
Same! Short chapters going backwards now!...
Is he a spy though? or is this gonna be a Fatal attraction? He wants to mark her for himself, & she's going to have to try to escape.. but dies she have her wolf still, i forget...
Girl Im dropping this shit 🥰...
I cannot read this anymore; and these short chapters that doesn’t even give anything concrete. How ridiculous!...