Sure, here is the revised version of the translation:
Why did he still address her like that?
At that moment, she noticed the line of text she'd been staring at suddenly vanish.
A message popped up on her screen:
[The sender has withdrawn a message.]
Lizetta, "..."
But this time, she didn’t have to wait long before he replied again.
Just two words:
[Available.]
It seemed he had stopped being erratic and returned to his usual reserved and laconic self, Mr. Dashiell.
Acting as if she had seen nothing, she replied to him.
[Let’s meet tomorrow afternoon, I have something to ask you.]
[Okay.]
In the hospital room, Remington had uncrossed his legs. The man, who had been lounging lazily against the sofa back, straightened up, resting his arms on his widespread legs, leaning forward with his phone in hand.
After agreeing, he feared he might seem too aloof, so he quickly added two more messages.
[What time?]
[Do you need me to pick you up?]
Lizetta thought about her schedule for the next day; she was already planning to visit the Starlight Group on behalf of Madden Media to submit a letter of intent for cooperation.
It would be a good opportunity to meet Remington, maybe around four or five in the afternoon?
Just as she was about to reply, another message from Remington popped up on her WhatsApp.
[I checked tomorrow’s schedule with Cedric, and I’ll only be free for dinner. I’ll book a restaurant, and we can discuss it over the meal.]
Lizetta thought for a moment, then sighed lightly, deleting the time she had typed out and replying simply with,
Comments
The readers' comments on the novel: Shattered Illusions Love Lies and Redemption (Lizetta and Remington)
Does evil really triumph always above the good in this novel ? How comes Stella's evilness has no end? Does the author believes that by giving justice and importance to bad people like Stella will make this novel interesring? I am starting to lose my patience and ask when will the writer finally will realize that the protagonist is Lizetta and not Stella....
Update pls thanks!...
This novel is too sad. When will Lizetta experience real happiness. Why is her life so miserable.. Author pls bring changes in the story....
Removed the 5 Chapters per day if you can't keep up to it....