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In the Thirty-Third Heaven, before a brand new black-and-white palace, Thea, Yaretzi, and Youcef appeared after three lights flickered.
“What are we doing here?” Youcef asked.
Yaretzi also looked at Thea.
“This is the new palace built by Yehria,” Thea said calmly. “At the same time, it’s where Waitara Path’s soul spirit used to hide. There should be many surprises inside.”
Then, she went up the stairs and pushed out her palm. A burst of Hongrome Aura spread over the black-and-white light cluster. The palace's formation instantly broke.
With a creak, the gate of the palace opened. Suddenly, countless light swords shot out from inside.
Thea didn’t dodge. She reached out and clenched her fists. Immediately, the light swords shattered.
“She’s still using that sinister tactic.”
After that, Thea resolutely entered the palace.
Upon seeing that, Youcef said, “She walked straight in. Isn’t she afraid there will be more traps and…”
“She has the Consummation Hongrome Body,” Yaretzi sighed. “It’s different from James’ Limitless Body. She isn’t vulnerable to all tribulations. She’s also shapeless and shadowless. Even the light of the Supreme Path can’t locate her, let alone a mere trap.”
Upon hearing that, Youcef looked envious. “Mom, I…”
“You can’t cultivate it.” As though Yaretzi knew what her son was thinking, she smiled and said, “The Hongrome Body and Limitless Body are one of a kind. Without the providence to become a Holiness, one can’t cultivate them.”
Then, she comforted him, “Youcef, with your qualifications, you can only be a Sacred Spirit. You can’t force it.”
Youcef took a deep breath before nodding heavily.
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The readers' comments on the novel: The Almighty Dragon General
Popups and ads… I don’t mind. But when the images with part of the story won’t load, then we have a problem....
How can you write a novel this bad, I'm pissed of reading all the mistakes with the main characters. Try reading the charismatic Charlie ward. It's along the same plot but a much better read....
Thea is always f@#king crying, she never listens to James and she is week as f@#k.She believes every thing her family says looking for approval....
y do make james look like a dick who is totally clueless...
W.t.f...
Reading this is just a waste of time....
James always behind in cultivation then always lost in the battle.what the heck is this story about i hate reading it.ill stop reading it now.nothing is good about the story.always failed to protect the love one's specially his wife.the story become boring when he wants to cultivate when he cultivate only at the low level.he did not attain the same level of his opponent.the story say even he mate a cultivator in the upper level he cal destroy it and when the battle begins he lose.Watafak is this.dont ready this novel...
So much malware......
So much malware and popups...
Hi can someone please explain why the author makes James regress everytime he makes a breakthrough,this is extremely frustrating...