His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 169
The clock moved unrelentingly as time ticked past.
The anticipation in Yvette's eyes was gradually replaced by disappointment. She restrained her emotions over and over again, but she eventually caved and couldn't resist making a call.
The phone rang for a long time before it was finally answered.
"James, are you busy?" Yvette asked cautiously.
A woman's voice could be heard from the other end of the line.
Yvette felt her heart getting stabbed by that sound, leaving it bleeding profusely. The pain she felt was unbearable.
She held the phone in a white-knuckled grip as tears streamed down her face.
"Did you hear that? I'm busy, sweetheart. I can't come over for dinner tonight." James' voice was hoarse with desire, making it even more alluring.
Yvette bit her lower lip, silencing herself as tears rolled down her cheeks.
James didn't even bother hanging up. Instead, he tossed his phone on the bed. Soon, the voices of their coupling wormed into Yvette's ears through the phone.
Yvette continued to listen like a foolish masochist. The woman's voice became an instrument of torture, tearing her apart.
Her heart felt as though it'd been wrenched out of her chest., and she found it difficult to breathe.
She thought she was special to James. After all, she'd been by his side the longest. She was the only person he had brought along on this trip to Orkford too.
Alas, it turned out that she was nothing but a joke.
Yvette could no longer bear to listen to their moans and violently threw the phone away.
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Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...
What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...
I don’t like that Stephen is dropping Tessa. They could work together to go after James. But if this happens then I’ll stop reading....
Whats wrong with the typing?? There a lot of weird words...
More frequent updates please...