His Unveiled Passion novel Chapter 175
Tessa could feel James' killing intent. He dared to fire a gun in broad daylight, right here in Orkford. This proved, once again, that he was a complete madman.
Despite the emergency situation, Stephen remained unfazed.
"They came prepared. Tessa, stay down. Don't move."
Stephen had been too careless. He thought he had shaken them off but they caught up soon after. Consequently, Tessa had almost taken a bullet.
His jaw tightened, and a storm brewed in his eyes.
Stephen slammed on the accelerator, weaving through traffic with sharp, calculated turns.
A gunshot rang out again, this time aimed at the driver's seat. Stephen jerked the wheel once more, narrowly dodging the bullet.
The side mirror exploded with a loud bang. Glass shattered, shards flying everywhere.
Tessa was thrown sideways, her body colliding against the car door.
Behind them, two cars were closing in. The black Aston Martin and silver Porsche were moving at terrifying speeds, trying to box them in.
In the Porsche's passenger seat, a man held a sniper rifle. He was the one firing the shots earlier.
Stephen slowed slightly. He had one hand on the wheel, and the other reached for the gun he had stashed beneath the seat.
Normally, he wouldn't carry one in his car. However, he wanted to defend against James.
The Aston Martin surged forward, nearly parallel to them.
Stephen suddenly braked, letting their cars align for just a second.
One second was all he needed. He raised the gun and fired.
The bullet tore through the gap in the window, heading straight for its mark.
The Aston Martin's window shattered, leaving a bullet hole as the only evidence.
The passenger seat was empty, but the driver wasn't so lucky.
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Also a lot of chapters were missing here. I went back to the application where it was originally published that’s why i know that this site is not reliable...
Fucked up book! Seems like the authors were not talking to each other. LOL. Yes authors, because of the inconsistencies....
The story went downhill after pg200 1. Why is Jacqueline back… she was expelled from the family already 2. There was no reason for Rowena to be mad at Tessa 3. The Jacobson already knows that Stephen wants to get back witb Tessa after they deal with James, so why is Rowena pushing hard? LOL 4. The family also knows that Stephen and Nancy have some sort of deal. The story was okay from page 1-199, but clearly it’s a thumbs down. I can deal with grammatical errors, but story errors is just different now....
This is funny! Jacqueline was also the culprit why James knew that nancy was Stephen's cousin. So, really, what happened when steohen tortured jacqueline hahah...
I wonder how many authors does this book have? Suddenly jacqueline was back and continue to bad mouth tessa. And was stunned that tessa knows her feelings about stephen. And then rowena was freaking mad at tessa too; because there werw multiple instances that tessa sharp-tongued her. 🤣...
What is wrong with the story flow? At chapter 160-164 there’s this whole thing about Stephen revealing in front of all the Jacobsons family members about Jacqueline’s inappropriate feelings towards him and her involvement in murder. There’s even this “Just like that, Jacqueline was officially expelled from the Jacobson family. Stephen then promptly handed her to the authorities.” So I was already glad the bitch is out of the picture. And then suddenly at chapter 236, Jacqueline appears again like nothing happened, still being the adoptive daughter of the Jacobson family and the family being unaware of her feelings for Stephen. Seriously? Doesn’t make sense anymore....
The latest update is just a repetition of the previous chapters...
I don’t like that Stephen is dropping Tessa. They could work together to go after James. But if this happens then I’ll stop reading....
Whats wrong with the typing?? There a lot of weird words...
More frequent updates please...