John Donner was a name synonymous with power and fear in Grayvale. He was a renowned martial artist who had reached the esteemed sovereign grade.
His reputation spanned decades, and his influence on Grayvale was absolute. He was simply known as Master Donner.
John was not just a man of influence. He was an untouchable force. Whether in legitimate circles or the underground, there was no one who dared to disrespect him.
As his arrival at the Riley family villa drew near, the atmosphere grew heavy. It was suffused with an invisible pressure that seemed to pierce through the walls. It was suffocating, like a tangible aura of dominance that preceded the man himself.
When John finally stepped into the villa, Dustin could hear his deliberate breathing. Each breath was perfectly measured.
It was a hallmark of a martial artist grandmaster. It was a breathing technique designed to amplify strength with every step. John was building his power with each step, and his potential devastation grew stronger as he approached.
By the time he reached the hall of the Riley family villa, he would be at the pinnacle of his form. He would be unstoppable and devastating.
“My brother, you’re just in time!” Archie greeted him with an ingratiating smile.
John’s icy face remained unmoved. He did not even look at Archie, let alone acknowledge him.
“John, today is a day of celebration, but an arrogant brat dared disrupt the occasion. He’s got some skills, enough to deal with my men, but nothing you can’t handle. I was just about to call for you when you arrived…” Archie prattled on as he reached out to pat John’s shoulder.
Suddenly, John’s sharp gaze turned cold and menacing.
It was the gaze of a man who carried a threat in his eyes.
Archie froze, and his face drained of color.
John brushed past him and stepped into the hall of the Riley family villa.
“Mr. Donner…” One of the Riley family members stepped forward and bowed low.
“Get out of my way.”
The icy words cut through the air like a blade. The Riley family members recoiled as they were too frightened to respond.
“Mr. Donner, it was me who sent word to invite you here…” Waylon stepped forward and was eager to claim credit.
Thud!
Without warning, John backhanded him. The strike was so forceful that Waylon was sent flying. He crashed head-first into the ornamental rock garden in the courtyard. Blood poured from his head.
Waylon was dumbfounded. The pain barely registered over his confusion.
What was happening? This was not how things were supposed to go…
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The readers' comments on the novel: My Aloof Sisters Asked for My Forgiveness
Nice one...
Shitty ending but considering overall I give the book .05 out of 5 stars. You used the same plot to many times, too many translation errors, even at the end you screwed around with the font and color because who knows why, the title had nothing to do with the story do I need to continue...
Just move to the enemy and let the snipers kill him for you Dustin. Use him as your shield easy peasy Mac n cheesey....
Tell hell hall said get his ass out here now or I will kill everyone here you have 10 seconds to do what I said. 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,0 to late...
Why does Dustin still think he owes his adoptive dad a debt? Sure he saved his life and help raise, taught martial arts etc... till his death but Dustin stayed on and put his life at risk and invested his time and money into his 5 daughters up until they came across their biological brother and kicked him out. Treat him like a thieving dog and have attempted numerous times to kill him. He finally showed some common sense by imprisoning the 1 sister and killing her cousin yet he lets the others slide. With his status and power I would have already killed them off or at the very least taken them and imprisoned them like the 1 and tortured the mom into spilling everything she knows and getting my rightful inheritance, but the author has to drag it out....
He said to mutilate the body and burn it why not start with beheading it and taking it back to show the city and place it as an offering to his family? That's what a great MC would have done....
Lame you change the name of the characters and use the same ole trope how many time are you going to use it? First it was the Langley sisters, then the McCall girl I believe this is the second or third time with Shawna. You need new material author...
Oh my not the weak who the MC showed mercy by not killing him because of some honor bound duty to a dead guy makes a comeback and forces the MC into a corner before the mc finally kills him arc 🤣...
🤣 now this is better just because I took her virginity doesn't mean I'm responsible for her. Love it....
When will he introduce his one eye willy for them to pet, stroke and kiss?...